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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Replied to ROUGE_CREED

    Bruh right before this, Gerrad had called Ren out to talk to him in front of everyone. And the next day, news come out that Gerrad is dead. Anyone who can put one and one together would realise that Ren was the culprit or at least be suspicious of Ren.

    Ch 220 Cleaning up [5]
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Commented

    Bruh how is gonna avoid getting found out for this. Gerrad has seen Ren's face and he could tell anyone. if Ren kills him, its gonna be very sus cause he had met up with Ren right before

    Ch 220 Cleaning up [5]
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Replied to idontreallyknow

    Its a rapier, which is like a thin pokey sword, and reaper isn't even a weapon unless you mean a scythe (the curvy long blade on a stick).

    This was partly why she didn't ignore John's annoying and blatant approaches. If not, she would've already dug her rapier into his skull. 
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Replied to Ray_ne

    Considering that the prodigy of their generation is Kevin, who is only D-, it would probably be very difficult for anyone to defeat the boss as it is obviously going to be much, much stronger that the normal enemies

    Boss monster - One thousand points. 
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Commented

    The guild's probably gonna ask him to join, but then again he has his own mercenaries...

    Ch 210 Proposal & Negotiations [1]
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Replied to Sunny_Sphynx

    Its the future. Probably everyone has a computer or sth

    Ch 209 Follow-up [2]
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Commented

    I think that this was a great chap. It showed us some development on the antagonist's side

    Ch 189 When everything comes crashing down [3]
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 187 When everything comes crashing down [1]
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Replied to AidenPierce72

    Looks like toradora

    'Tsk, you tsundere'
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Replied to jonny_dangerous

    If I recall correctly, after that baron incident, he said that he realised how easily he could lose his life, so he started training more in order protect himself and his family I think. But yeah, he also trained before that to earn money by raiding dungeons I think

    Since my life and death moment in the dungeon, I increased my training time from five hours a day to nine hours a day. Whenever I had free time on my hands, I would train. It was only after I almost died that I realized that life was as fickle as it could be. Just a single moment and I could die. Only if I was stronger would I be able to live.
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Replied to Haowei_Chen

    Something that I forgot to address is: please have more scenes like the after-party one. That was probably the best climax in this entire novel so far. It combined the main character's intelligence and logic with his planning and strength. Thank's author. You should take a longer break from all the writing seeing that you chugged out basically a chapter a day before last week.

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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Posted

    This is the first review that I have ever written so yeah, bear with me. No spoilers. I am not an expert at judging novels, but I can definitely say that considering that this is the first novel the author has written, this is a masterpiece. However, not all masterpieces can be perfect, and I would hope to give some constructive criticism so that the author could try and improve, on the off chance that author-sama reads this. Writing Quality Although there are minor grammatical errors here and there, I think that it is barely noticeable unless you are like reading it out loud or something. Other than that, the writing quality is very good. Stability of Updates Do I need to explain? The author, who claimed that this was just a hobby (if i recall correctly) releases chapters nearly everyday. Thanks a lot. Story Development The start was very similar to TNE, but the author did mention that. It gets much different later on and I appreciate that the author tries to write a different plot. To be honest, I think that there is a lot of build up for small arcs, but I appreciate longer chapters so that's fine. Character Design To be completely frank, the author has not developed much of the other characters. It could be much better, such as writing more from side character's point of view (even though the novel is called Author POV) or even just describing the backstory of more of the main cast. Here are some of that characters that should, in my opinoin, be more involved with the plot so far: Mellisa, I would love to see a mini-arc of her in which her personality becomes better. Emma, my first impression of her was that she is a b*tch. Some character development or knowledge of her backstory would be appreciated. Donna, my current view of her is that she is also a b*tch, who ony cares about the strong and discards the weak. Smallsnake, maybe some backstory, or his real identity? Also, another thing that I wanted to tell the author, is that he should describe the looks of the main cast more detailed. The only thing I know is that they are beautiful/ handsome. When I was first reading the novel, in order to understand the scene that the author were describing better, I would have the webnovel's wiki (https://the-authors-pov.fandom.com/) on my other screen so that I know how the characters look like. World Background I gave this a high rating as I had read TNE before and I know how the world roughly felt. Same as the character design, I would wish that the author could try and depict the scenes better. Miscellaneous I think that the author wrote too much about things unrelated to the plot. Although personally I like long chapters, other people might not like reading these things. Review for readers Just try reading this. I won't hurt and there are a lot of free chapters. If you like modern fantasy or futureish novels that has a good main character but not too overpowered, try this.

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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
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    1 day in earth = 10 days in immora 1 year is 10 years

    Wars always tended to be extremely long and this one was not an exception. With both sides currently being in a deadlock, I estimated that the war would end in a couple of years.
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Replied to Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU

    It was mentioned before that the author had reached F-ranked and that he had just arrived to this world for a few weeks. Emma, who is one of the top few in the year 1, was only "borderline E-rank". Im pretty sure that mc is growing very fast, from G to F in a matter of weeks

    ...no if I was stronger, then nothing could stop me from achieving what I wanted.
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  • Haowei_Chen
    Haowei_Chen2yr
    Replied to jonny_dangerous

    From my view, the author started to train more than 5 hours a day because of the Baron demon incident. I think that if nothing wrong had happened during that dungeon, he would still be as lazy as before. Correct me if im wrong though

    Since my life and death moment in the dungeon, I increased my training time from five hours a day to nine hours a day. Whenever I had free time on my hands, I would train. It was only after I almost died that I realized that life was as fickle as it could be. Just a single moment and I could die. Only if I was stronger would I be able to live.
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