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System_Creator5mthCommented<How could I be so weak?!>- System_Creator5mthCommentedAccording to the notes, Wizards and Knights were completely different. Knights relied on their physical bodies, while Wizards relied on their mental strength to interfere with reality. The natural meditation technique increased mental strength.
- System_Creator5mthCommentedThe rain hadn't stopped pouring for 24 hours. When the originally hot and stuffy summer was complemented with the moisture, it made it rather hard for anyone to breathe in this environment.
- System_Creator5mthCommentedAfter hearing that cry, the faces of the people in the room relaxed, and the fat lady brought the baby to the arms of a pale but beautiful woman lying on an old-fashioned bed.
- System_Creator1yrReplied to johndevin1
nah brilliance was the level 3 law for light
Shang called it Brilliance. - System_Creator1yrCommented
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Gravis quickly found what he was looking for, raised his saber to the tiger's skin like a razor, and ran it along its underside… right through the middle between its hind legs. The genitals were not protected, and he severed them easily. Gravis didn't remain and left the tiger's underside. - System_Creator1yrReplied to WarmaisachCh 338 Chapter 338 – Mind Battle
- System_Creator1yrCommentedCh 60 The Reborn
- System_Creator1yrReplied to Jyochi
mf he is literally a swordsman who is blind, how is that immature or edgy?
"You fool, will you stop being so disrespectful to the teacher." Erin said, "Do you not know who he Is, Perhaps if I told you his war name you would know. This man is Sergeant Leo, or known as the Blind swordsman." - System_Creator1yrReplied to Hina_Hasegawa
i got the same vibes as that fight as well
"So this is what you've decided? You've decided to kill your friends?!" Zain shouted back. - System_Creator1yrPosted
Gotta be one of my favourites on the site. It's entertaining and is ranked near the top for a reason. First, the writing quality. The grammar and spelling is pretty much flawless. The author explains things concisely and efficiently without too many chunky info dumps that confuse the reader and the fight scenes are described in a way which really allows the reader's imagination to work. The fight choreography is good as well. Second, the story development. Let's start with pacing. It's good, like really good. The story is fast and action-packed when it needs to be and slows down appropriately to accommodate the more information-heavy or character-focused arcs. Next, the various mysteries present. The author does a great job in making us feel like we are discovering the secrets of the world along with Quinn and his friends, with the political relations and vampire relationship with dalki done particularly well imo. Finally, the expansion of the scope of things. The stage the characters act on grows along with their progression in strength and their knowledge of the happenings in the world. This continuous expansion of scope really makes the reader feel as if there is no end to the things we don't know and continuously adds more possibilities for the future of the story, allowing more and more development to be threshed out. Third, we have the character design. I love the characters in this book. Each character brings a new depth to the story and provides a unique and fresh viewpoint and experience of the world around them to the reader. For example, we see through a certain character at the start how some privileged individuals are not even aware of the discrimination faced by those with a low ability levels, in contrast to Quinn, who had experienced that discrimination first hand for all of his life. A lot of novels struggle to make their characters feel 3D and real, but through these unique views and morals, the author of MVS has really done a good job with that. Last but not least, the world background. This novel has got to have my favourite world background of any story on this platform. Starting off simple with the dalki invasion and abilities, MVS constantly expands on the backstory and origins of the world. From the origin of the ability users to the history behind the vampires and the creation of the dalki, everything comes together and links back up so well to forming an expansive and intriguing universe filled with legacy from those long passed. I recommend this to anyone looking for a long and fulfilling read with plenty of action and development.
- System_Creator1yrReplied to bloodrose9
yessir
"Next group, Quinn Talen, Vorden Blade, Peter Chuck, Layla Munrow, and Erin Heley. Come to the front to take your test!" - System_Creator1yrPosted
This was enjoyable for a while (despite the god awful grammar) because of the well built world and creative characters. However, the story, although not horrible, started to drag on a little bit around chapter 40 or so. This wasn't enough to make me stop reading, so I persevered and continued to see what the novel has in store. Then I got to the romance. The romance in this story is so unnecessarily cringe and pushed in your face that I can compare it to a 7 year old telling you about their love life. It's too much. It's way too much. I came to read an interesting tale of a vampire and his journeys to different planets, fighting a variety of enemies and meeting people along the way, not some cringe sappy love story out of high school musical. I'm afraid this is yet another drop from me.