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The novel is good so far, it's fairly balanced, but I have some thoughts about it. * The main character's power has increased too quickly, even though there is a lot of time before Tanjiro appears. This gives me the feeling that you are rushing to make him invincible. I wish you would take the time to increase his power, even if it's by skipping time and increasing his combat experience. * The point that I really disliked was that he is able to stop the regeneration of demons with ease, depriving them of their biggest advantage after blood arts, if not more important. He gained this ability too easily, which removed the element of desperate and exciting fighting that is needed in the story. You could have added it with restrictions on it, such as stopping the regeneration of demons, but the stronger the demon, the slower the regeneration would become, but not stop it as you did with the technique called Blood Burning, I think. It increased its power, but it also increased the severity of fatigue after use. * I hope you will seriously consider the speed of the main character's power progression and increase the desperate and exciting fights like the ones found in anime. But overall, the work is great and thank you for the effort and I look forward to more.
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