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Comments of chapter undefined of The World Serpent

TheVoidLord
TheVoidLordLv11TheVoidLord

A good start!! 👍

He11Watcher
He11WatcherLv15He11Watcher

A bit too many capital letters. Story seems good though.

kiwami803
kiwami803Lv15kiwami803

Id never sell my soul

Sorrest_
Sorrest_Lv14Sorrest_

Why Do You Speak In Capital?

TsukiHanako
TsukiHanakoLv2TsukiHanako

I'm expecting great things♪ ( ^ω^)♪♬

Shika_Kagura
Shika_KaguraLv13Shika_Kagura

This is good, I'm gonna keep reading this until I found a reason to drop the story or read it all the way to the end, also I have a question, why the big snek seems like trying hard to get the mc to make a deal with him/her? is the mc soul have something special in it? or maybe it's just the mc 'bad' luck and the big snek looking amusement and 'coincidentally' the big snek found mc soul and decided to have fun with it? anyway, peace out ✌️

Drain_the_innocent
Drain_the_innocentLv11Drain_the_innocent

Big snek.

Cheerylixilis
CheerylixilisLv2Cheerylixilis

there's a bad habit of using capitals where you didn't need to but that last paragraph cemented my interest. I got wonderfully delicious chills at that idea and unf it's gooood. kind of a lovecraftian feel of something so immensely powerful and large looking down on you.

LATIOS
LATIOSLv3LATIOS

(°∆° that first part was mind blowing expect me being here alot :)

Dragramis
DragramisLv4Dragramis

Why are So many Different words Capitalized

Margaret03_123
Margaret03_123Lv13Margaret03_123

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dockadile_06Lv14dockadile_06

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LunaSol35Lv14LunaSol35

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Margaret03_123Lv13Margaret03_123

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RICHIESPIDER_505
RICHIESPIDER_505Lv13RICHIESPIDER_505

This my first time reading this novel and chapter and I agree u will I never sold my sold to a person u don’t know. I understand the emotions and logic what happen to the mc.The aka god try to force her to do something be a force or trick.has never read this novel and read this chapter.how my th oughts if the the girl think she don’t not sold her sold to anyone but her big brother debt case of her and the god give deal that the whole world will forget her existence but here the qu estion can the god do that and what the plan the god for her.oh ya I mind what reminded the god will force or accept he/she.last question what the difference deal and forced.I knew the answer

Charles_Brown_6598
Charles_Brown_6598Lv15Charles_Brown_6598

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keulijeu
keulijeuLv2keulijeu

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TheVoidLord
TheVoidLordLv11TheVoidLord

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MooseMax
MooseMaxLv12MooseMax

Good so far, but place edit the overwhelming ammount of capital letters I almost every sentence and make is consistent ie Ancient Voice and in the next sentence it's Ancient voice... put only the important thing I capital letter like Fate or don't

Kyriakos
KyriakosLv15Kyriakos

ug, garbage.