I'm done with this garbage book

why are you making the mc so stupid?

the chariot is so stupid. why not an undead beholder that shoots disintegration beams from his eye stalks. Anything would be cooler than a 5 skid sleigh...

tacky garbage. I can't imagine living in a metal box that is nothing but yellow. nightmare.

I wish he would stop the dual exhistance at this point. I real want to see him unleash his full potential.

Isn't it White Flame? Jesus, can you try to remember the names of your own characters??? It's bad enough you play gender bender with your pronouns calling characters he or she. This is your story dude, can you at least put a tiny bit of effort to be consistent ffs

what does he need the 5 million for? he still has a hundred million. Just carrying it around ....

y not the liquid mana potions?

This book is getting a little bit too cutesy. Sure hope this changes ...

Sorry Author, the mc is just too dumb. I'm out, GOODLUCK

The MC has to keep secret edged weapons/axe he has no skill in and doesn't know how to use because he spent months in his room doing nothing. God, how bad can this get....

MC is a moron.

Where Is the +50 to each stat?

please stop using he's as his... these are totally totally different things.

Love of God, please put the 5 points into int. the mc is a dullard.

Unfortunately the author thinks he's clever by putting a "if your not reading this in webnovel...." blurb at the bottom of EVERY chapter to pad his word count. This increases the number of coins you pay. He also plasters personal exam and school issues at the top eating even more of your coin. On top of this the story is pretty vanilla. Skip this, it's a money grab.

Your chapters are WAY too short and stop padding them with the webnovel garbage at the bottom. Your not fooling anyone. I am not paying for F'n webnovel spam! Your begging for a freaking one star.

For the love of God, no harems, please!

you should really redo the first 35 chapters... reading them is like taking a meat tenderizer to your balls.

Good! Let the 🦎 rot!