I've noticed it for a while, but you have a bad habit of repeating yourself a lot. it makes things repetitive and a little of a chore to read.

there's a bad habit of using capitals where you didn't need to but that last paragraph cemented my interest. I got wonderfully delicious chills at that idea and unf it's gooood. kind of a lovecraftian feel of something so immensely powerful and large looking down on you.

It's a fun enough read and I can definitely see why people would enjoy it. I did too for a while. I got up to chapter 47 before I backed away. But for me, it's just... too fast and too... I dunno what word I want to use. The main character barely spends any time as her original forms. It feels like the author is wasting no time to make them human. They get a sword they are best at as their first weapon. They feel like they never have any issues or problems. It feels very power fantasy, which, yeah, that's fine. But it feels too much in this. The humans have been given nothing but negativity. Which is whatever but there wasn't a single one that wasn't a horrible, disgusting person. It's just... everything goes her way, nothing can stop her and it's just... boring to read. There's no real conflict for me to care about. Because everything always goes well for her.

wow that was super awkward. like others said, it really hurt the chapter for like a third of it to be about religion. it felt super out of place. if it was glanced over and had the two of them talk off screen then give their thoughts, alright. but as it was it was just really uncomfortable and awkward.