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kiwami803

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I'm a fan of reading 👍 I'm wanting to learn how to write novels!

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  • kiwami803
    kiwami80310h
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    Oh so easy to trick those two, Wanda it depends on timeline

    "Current diary holders: Wanda Maximoff, Natasha Romanoff, Nick Fury."
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami80311h
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    Not gonna lie, I liked writing this chapter. Total domination as it should be. Tell me how you liked it. There is something else that happened in 1913, concerning one of the Scamander brothers, but that is minor and will be explained next chapter. 
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    Humanity Unchained
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8031d
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    I think it's good, just do a time skip or go to a different world, start the conquests

    The story seems to be losing interest. I might take a break to go back to the drawing board. 
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    Humanity Unchained
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8031d
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    When her parents found out about her possessing magic, they first wanted to tell everyone about it. But they didn't, as they understood what would happen to their baby girl. She would be burnt alive. They loved her too much to see her as a dangerous and malicious witch. So instead of meeting the unknown with fear, they showered her with love and books. 
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8032d
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    Bring the sister in after telling her, gotta make the family strong

    [One Thousand Forced Players Card: A one-time use item. By using this card, you can force a thousand human beings who are 16 years old and above to participate in your game. It doesn't matter if they are willing to play your game or not, but as long as this card is used, they either lose the game or win the game.]
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    God-Level Game Developer System: I Brought In-Game Items To Real World
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8032d
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    When Weiss looked at the time on his desktop computer to see how much time had passed since he entered the game workshop, he was immediately surprised to see that only a second had passed!
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8032d
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    Nvm my question is answered in the next chapters ✌️

    It was indeed the sun. After all, Weiss planned to create a game world and he wanted it to be the same as Blue Star but with some modifications depending on the game plot he had in mind.
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8032d
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    Never underestimate stupidity

    "Especially when the otherworld invasion starts, my games at that time would be valued at an all-time high since it's the only source for humans to become stronger without having to risk their lives. Only a dumbass would want to break the rules and get banned from getting stronger."
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8032d
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    He should make it where every new player will receive one penny (1cent) once after playing, this way it will allow everyone to know this game effects reality and items can be brought back to reality

    "Although this Zombie Survival game looks quite difficult, it's mostly dependent on who lives the longest. Since there are one thousand players per server, only the top 3 will receive rewards so the last three to survive will be the winner."
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8032d
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    Time moves differently in here right? If it's the same as outside I would run out of time thinking what to create as this is really important so yeah lol

    It was indeed the sun. After all, Weiss planned to create a game world and he wanted it to be the same as Blue Star but with some modifications depending on the game plot he had in mind.
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8032d
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    After many months of working, Neoth had finally succeeded. The E-metal was complete. The finishing touches were done, by adding the same properties to the metal as the Asauchi. And then ... he presented it to the Adeptus Custodes. 
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    Humanity Unchained
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8032d
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    Thanks for taking my suggestion, van created a bunch of metals you can look up

    I thought about visiting Asgard to get some Uru, but there is another metal, called Orichalcum from the Death Mage Universe, which is a better idea. Adamantine is magically conductive already and Orichalcum will be the cream of the crop against mages of many kinds. 
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    Humanity Unchained
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8032d
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    Well, now I have all the Vibranium I need, the correct way to create Promethium and Proto-Adamantium and Nth metal. Only two things are missing now. Adamantine, which is used by the Greek Gods and another metal which is not from this universe, called Orichalcum.
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    Humanity Unchained
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8033d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter ✌️

    Ch 29 Emperor's Metal I
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8033d
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    Don't forget, go to death mage to pick up Orichalcum(gods metal) it's stronger than adamantite and more magically conducive than mythril

    The two obvious choices were the DC and the Marvel Universe. The Custodian armours Neoth wanted to create will be some of the most powerful and impressive creations, which combined magic and technology. The Adeptus Custodes all had a magic resistance that surpassed that of the dragons of this world. And their armour had to be on par with them. 
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8033d
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    Thanks for the chapter ✌️ overall could use some cleaning up but I like it

    Ch 8 ancient one
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8033d
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    Pretty good starter pack

    [ Ebomy maw( MCU version) - complete ]
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8033d
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    Stealthy ninjas shouting their techniques sounds so dumb lol

    With a low shout, a large tree in front of Uzumaki Naruto that required several people to surround him was directly broken in half.
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    Konoha: After The Diary Was Exposed, The Kunoichi Collapsed
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8033d
    Commented

    Hyuga hinata, cmon

    "Uzumaki Naruto's Diary (Haruno Sakura), Uzumaki Naruto's Diary (Hinata Hinata)..."
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    Konoha: After The Diary Was Exposed, The Kunoichi Collapsed
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  • kiwami803
    kiwami8033d
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    Hearing Hinata Hinata's voice, Hinata Hinata suddenly raised her head, her eyes full of disbelief.
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    Konoha: After The Diary Was Exposed, The Kunoichi Collapsed
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