Very well written novel. In terms of writing quality, it is the cream of the crop on this platform. Nicely crafted characters and world background. The only thing working against it is the irregular updates and cliché tropes.

Usually, I would write lengthier reviews, but I'm making this one brief. The novel is kind've crap. Truth be told, there is definitely merit to it. The weapon styles and initial introduction was really captivating and intriguing. However, the more I read, the more unimpressed I became. The writing quality slowly eroded and the introduced set of characters all had lackluster archetypes. The entire "set of protagonists" are just a clear ripoff of almost every other book with a similar prose. For me writing, as a native English speaker, grammar and flow are 2 important aspects that are strong determinants in judging the bearability of online web novels. I know a lot of people on this platform aren't native, and so if this is the case, then this book is yours to read. But it's just the weak "flow" and the way outlandish dialogues coupled with edgy monologues that just wrecks this book.

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This is an excellent, well-crafted book. For me there are definitely some flaws, concerning writing quality and character design. The writing is not perfect, especially in later chapters-- with minuscule grammar flaws and such. With story development, and world background, it is on point. The idea of using a system has been repeated throughout this platform, but the author transforms the system and incorporates it into a game. The idea itself is intrinsically unique especially with the introduction of the elder tree and it's withering, which allows for the creation of a strong premise. However, there are still components that are unclear-- the final question. How do you win? There are rankings, there is a first place spot, but in the end, how is the inheritors of the final system determined. With character design, the main character and Kai are the only two characters. There is definitely some degree of emotion and empathy towards these characters, but I'd regard them as lacking a bit of depth. The characters (Zero primarily) are marketed as tricky and strategic, but display a lack of emotion concerning anger, fear, or frustration. There should be a small addition to the character's internal feeling, without writing, "that I am happy.. I am frustrated." Overall, this is a great novel, and I strongly encourage the author to continue writing.

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I’ve read through 35 chapters as of currently, and I find it to be mediocre at best. The whole premise was great, and I especially liked the character’s backstory. However, the problem is the entirety of the plot is strange, and abnormal. First of all, the dynamic between Lily and the main character doesn’t make much sense. His “flirting” was just him praying on her backstory. It didn’t make sense, and realistically, is not how you acquire any type of relationship– friendship or not. It’s even more unnatural how close they get– within a span of 2 chapters. Moving on to the writing quality, to say the least, it’s lackluster. The dialogue between characters is no better. The whole problem is that the characters are just not realistic, they’re uncanny. Yes, mc’s relationship with mom does have a reasonable depth to them, but the way he perceives, addresses, and dotes on others, is uncanny. They’re plenty of novels with wonderful diction and style, and this is certainly not one of them. I’m not expecting collegial level writing, but a version of writing that incorporates clean grammar that doesn’t force readers to reread a sentence because of how strangely it was formatted. Regarding just about stability of updates, and world background, I don’t have much to say.

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It's not a bad novel, but it's clear that it's very similar to the rest. It's a hater gets transmigrated to the hatee's novel where he has to survive in an academy. Now there's already a problem with this novel, it's too similar compared in a the span of this platform. Even the character dynamics I'd argue is very similar to a lot of novels. There's this one kid who came from out of a blue, but is already the strongest out of them all. One girl who's a princess. Another kid who's a novel but is a rival. And then there's the mc, who wants to be an extra, in order maintain the balance of the novel. I'm not arguing that this is a terrible trope or dynamic but I think there could be more to it. However, I do really like the homogenous mixture of writing quality, and story development that propels this novel forward, making it be an enjoyable read.

Very good novel. Writing quality is very good. If you're a ESL reader then I'd recommend against reading it. The novel is filled to the brim with figurative language, and sarcasm. All goes to suggest that if you're reading web novels, for the sheer action and clean thrill, then don't read this novel. However, if you're a reader who appreciates the satirical nature of writing, then enjoy. I've read many satirical essays and literary works composed in the 1800s, and I can say that this is more enjoyable read than all the essays prescribing self reliance and fundamentalism. Stability of updates, I have nothing to discuss. Last chapter has been almost a week, so, where he at dawg. World background, is honestly not bad. It's another one of those rinse and repeat, with a standard, academy, system and a bunch of mystical skills, with an author transmigrating to their own novel. There's not really a twist, but hey, sometimes even unoriginal works can be outstanding. Character design is a bit questionable. All of the side characters/main protagonist have their own clear defined personalities. Chloe is different though, because her characteristics is an unclear imitation of the mc's, which I don't think should be the case. I'm not arguing against the author's intention with the character, but I'm not a fan of it. The progression is the weakest of all 5 elements, in which, I feel the arcs are moving too fast. It's obvious that the author is able to extend a chapter by two fold when the mc's inner monologues, but the fact that the author is in an academy, then working as a bodyguard, with the whole class unaware is his disappearance, is just a bit peculiar. There also should be more training montages. Is he a lazy bum? because unlike all the other characters who have a designed combat prowess, he relies solely on his one skill, with his swordsmanship, suddenly honing itself out of blue.

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This must be one of the author's alt accounts

Weird dialogue

Had the exact same thought

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Read to the last possible chapter: 38. The overall consensus that I've drawn is that this book is a moderately well written book. he overall background behind is inherently unique, in a way it reminds me of the movie Jumper. The writing quality is well - written, clean, yet lacks description that paints the necessary picture to support the writing. Story development wise, is that it's good. However, one of the biggest drawbacks is the character - design. The main character is the depth, and are 2 sides are shown of him-- the ruthless mc, and the carefree one. Although this is shown, the other extras are treated as baggage that become discarded within a chapter or two. More or less cannon fodder with a personality so shallow, it is as if I'm wading through a puddle. This of course is only in the volume 1, as the situation improves through the development of volume 2. In conclusion, it's a pretty good read, and I hope the author doesn't drop this.

Novel is mediocre at best. Writing quality starts off strong however decays as the novel progresses. Problems such as capitalization, correct tense usage makes the novel feel awkward. The development, character design are all okay. There's nothing inherently special about it because it feels as if this type of character archetypes is replicated x100 times on every other novel. Same could be said about the world background. Overall, it's not a terrible book. Feels strange and weird to read it, and is a good read for readers who appreciate your standard "bullied mc grows strong, goes to academy" type scenario

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