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Review Detail of Arkella in My Daemon System

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Arkella
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Novel is mediocre at best. Writing quality starts off strong however decays as the novel progresses. Problems such as capitalization, correct tense usage makes the novel feel awkward. The development, character design are all okay. There's nothing inherently special about it because it feels as if this type of character archetypes is replicated x100 times on every other novel. Same could be said about the world background. Overall, it's not a terrible book. Feels strange and weird to read it, and is a good read for readers who appreciate your standard "bullied mc grows strong, goes to academy" type scenario

My Daemon System

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JJ_Francis
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Sorry you didn't like it, i understand that everybody's choice is not the same. But thanks for the honest review

JJ_Francis
JJ_FrancisAuthorJJ_Francis

I will add though, i think you should follow the book up a little more.