Right? I do not think its possible for someone to live in a world for more than a decade, and not grow atleast somewhat emotionally attached to his family. The way it keeps saying how he wont be able to see them as family because of his past life is just dumb. And the way he acts like he will just pay back his family for taking care of him is weird, you cant possibly have emotions and yet not want to connect to your actual blood related parents, reincarnated or not

Some people are just more emotional than others. Ive been reading this story for only a day, yet id probly tear up if something happened, its just how some people are 😂

They're gods, they're gods, they're gods, they're gods, they're gods. Alright man i get it, you have said it like 20 times over the past few chapters, and its getting a little annoying. Its like he is trying his best to make us know that silver will never be able to understand or compare to gods, and its annoying as hell, especially when the love interests are goddesses.

What happened to the consistent posting 😔

I was reading another naruto fanfic that just posted a new chapter, and the chapter came with the reveal that pakura was actually alive 😂😂😂 what are the chances of that

I checked for new chapters like 10 minutes ago, and saw none. The chances of him posting a chapter 18 days later, just for me to have checked 5 minutes before he posted is so small

Author liked your comment lmao

so sorry, i honest to god cant remember, since im reading so many harry potter novels, and this is the shortest one. but since i said there was, then there most likely is

Glad we got a POV of the MC

Bro doing nothing for himself basically. Even his max power wouldnt be his own. The only thing i can think of would be his x genes, but who knows when thatll activate

I understand the respect, but i do not believe anyone would be able to treat an alternate version of themself with this amount of respect

Why you introducing so many good female characters if you just gonna make it Emma frost only? Its one big tease

"Jerry wondered if this was the same Thanos that would snap his fingers and erase half the life in the universe", im sorry, do you meet alot of giant purple dudes named Thanos?

Starlord punchin air rn

Bro rockin the 1000 letter chapters

But they can literally check his lineage, his whole family is shinobi i think 💀💀

Your story doesnt seem that planned. You make him obtain a trifecta falna, which is supposed to be 3 immortals, but you throw a goddess in there for no reason. Then you have the other 2 immortals be a swordsman and a knight, but make the MC someone who doesnt like swords? This of course isnt mentioning the fact the MC completely lacks his own thoughts and personality, but that part is okay i guess, since he was technically just born.

You couldve made it an adventurer from the past that got qualification to become a servant. If you wanted to establish a connection, just make him join a normal familia. Its lazy as hell to bring up trifecta falna just to make a goddess join it

Should change the synopsis, i didnt read at first because i thought he was told to acquire the falna as some sort of way to pay back the god who helped him, but in this chapter it is said he needs it to live.

So the whole story is just a vacation? Im not really sure what to think of that