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Hm... One question I have is, will he go to the Shuumatsu universe? Only when he's strong enough, of course. And if so, which Valkyrie would be his volund and also who would he replace, plus some of his feats should be kind of in the "public domain". Basically some titles "overcoming" borders between worlds, etc.
This chapter was so good and beautiful! As I don't know Terraria I can't ask for the next boss, but could the next world or one of them be Jujutsu Kaisen? As Deerclops himself realized, Devas' energy is not evil like his, but dark, so it's kind of like the cursed energy of jujutsu sorcerers.
Hmm.. An author request, how about not making Super Smash Bros and Mario Kart separate? And yes together. Like, two games in one, you can play with karts if you put this function on the home screen, or play with the smash function for super smash bros style fights.
Do you know what would be cool about revenge when Akira is strong? He leaves her alive, since she wants to die Because it's obvious he's going to get revenge, and maybe realize she wants to die, so that would be the petty revenge he can take
This is getting pointless, this fight literally serves no purpose other than showing that the MC isn't going down without a fight. And even if he considered taking Akeno or Shuri hostage he would somehow rethink it and probably say "honor doesn't allow it", so he will die with honor and be a footnote. Author, I'm not trying to demotivate you or say anything bad about the story, but it's time for progression in the story and not fight after fight. The first fight made sense, the second was ok, but is this the third or fourth? I don't remember why they don't help at all and are remarkably useless.
MC has to invoke Florence Nightingale. I imagine him, Marta and Florence fighting just because. And also please, make Goetia feel traumatized by the MC, because he did something like punching his pillars and him. And it doesn't necessarily have to be trauma, but just him not wanting to have anything to do with the MC.
As he wants to "recreate" boxing, will he be the God of Boxing? Like Apollo of Shuumatsu. If so, I ask again that his divine weapon be the strings of Artemis, which are incredibly versatile, just like Apollo which has countless divinities.