Hello dreamer it's me Raishico your story has a lot of potential, I think you should start polishing the story using the quilbot or goodreads apps. I won't be posting anymore of my chapters because I 'm signing them to starywritting for a contract try putting your word their.

The story is good, I like the main characters I hope more chapters will be added. The story development is superb. Keep up the good work man.

Hello Sir, can I know who you are?

Character design has its beauty and the world background is described well. Astoria, the female lead is very mysterious. Overall the story is excellent. The writing quality is superb. I've to add it to my library. Keep up the good work.

Thanks man

I was just joking the discord is still raishico hehe

It's okay if you don't have to review anymore quite aware of my mistakes. you don't have to bother. Thanks anyways.

lack of resources to provide the growing population.

It's future earth, Orphan children are considered an outcast of society. they are not allowed to have a surname unless they pay for one.

Thank you man

thanks man that was an error I change it thanks

Base on what I read so far the development they are heading is really interesting, the story is will thought out. Note Gonna lie the writing quality is great. Keep up the good work.

It's really interesting read

hey man your writing quality is really good

thanks man

Thank you man

Hey man, I like the title of the story, the concept behind the story is nice. I added your story I just hope that you will add more chapters in the future looking forward. keep up the good work.

*worldbuilding

The work building will start the moment the void is fully opened.

Thank you so much I lab you man.