Review Detail of Tangerqueen in ennen

Writing Quality (3/5): Sorry for starting on a bad note, but I think I did have to point this out. Apart from having to reread some sentences twice to fully understand what you were trying to say, I would also come across missing punctuation or wrong spelling (you might want to even check some of your characters' names). So for each of those things, I docked a star in this category. But this isn't anything that you can't fix with a bit of proofreading. Updates (5/5) Story Development (5/5): Honestly, I found the premise of your story to be really interesting! Character Design (5/5): No one is really annoying, and everyone seems to be fairly likable. World Background (5/5): I think you give a good balance of what I should see in this world and blank spaces so that I can still have the creativity to imagine the rest of the scene and fill in the details. Great job, and best of luck!