Review Detail of Akira_Monadelle in ennen

This story has a very interesting plot, I was immediately intrigued by it from the synopsis. However, this novel is plagued by errors of all parts of English. Capitalization, Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling is absolutely terrible. The story is very difficult to understand because of them and as a result is very confusing. I recommend you proofread your chapters and make use of Grammarly to identify any possible errors or get yourself an editor. Sometimes while I'm reading I'm wondering if this is even English. The novel is filled with redundancies and some situations are described poorly. The sentences are poorly structured and you keep switching between the past tense and the present tense. It's the same confusing switch for the point of view, at one point it was in the third person then the first person then back to the third. Overall, this novel has tremendous potential but it won't be legendary like you want it to be with these errors. I suggest you quickly fix them. I hope you are not offended by my review but I only give honest reviews after reading. I'll certainly read again once the novel is fixed. [img=recommend]