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Jatin_friGus563

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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus56311mth
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    Shortcomings: (1) presence of zaraki clan not changing anything from yondaime's death which is due to obito but condition of obito is only due to non-sufficient battle prowess in third shinobi war and filling with canon fodders to increase number to win battle, uchiha massacre, and maybe even Sakumo hatake death as we haven't been told about Kakashi. (2) Making the protagonist have some sort of harem template , i know there will be no harem but mc personality is definitely like a harem mc. (3) This one is like a question does mc have full memory of Naruto. If yes then most of the events like hinata's kidnapping, uchiha massacre etc. wouldn't happen because he could change it even if the presence of zaraki clan changes nothing if he wished. Only thing I like about this fanfic is the character interaction.

    Ch 9 Chapter 9: Big boss vibes
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus56311mth
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    According to me Hiruzen's only shortcomings was his political ability his solution for solving a village problem always leads to ultimate harm of the village. For Eg : Senju clan, Roots existence which produces dead soldiers prepared with inhuman torture of mind and body to the fellow village person who was supposedly a family(konoha's person), Concession to enemies, Not properly dealing with village matters (uchiha), Shift blame of death of yondaime on a newborn baby naruto to maintain stability in konoha.

    Ch -1 Before reading! ⚠️
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus56311mth
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    i also think hiruzen was an op character comparable to his teacher second hokage and surpassed him in his peak during age of 30-40 with his multi abilities in every field. But according to me fighting wise in a death match second hokage will still win as he is superior in terms of battle iq.

    Ch -1 Before reading! ⚠️
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    don't it's too annoying for some brain dead thing sometimes there are things which should always be kept secret.

    Ch 73 V.3 Chapter 14
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    let both hyuga elder and doctor to be drowned in deepest part of abyss, they had audicity to pry into mc's secrets. i guess with this even hiruzen is red flagged to die. Amen 🙏🙏

    Ch 157 The Curious Hyuga
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    my answer is also no but i would love to see kushina without a tailed beast caged in her body and who is also kinda monitering her which i don't like.

    No (I recommend this but it is your choice.)
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    i wouldn't prefer aot as there is no good use of bizarre titan abilities. I think God of Highschool might be good choice.

    Ch 10 Which world should Simulated be next?
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    dude go to hokage statues for login

    Ch 1 Sasuke vs Yoroi
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    +1

    2. focus on Ren and only mention the important parts of the chunin exams.
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    how could she has madara breath in her , madara can't leave his cave as chakra tube supporter from ten tail might get disconnected and it is not long enough. So did he just summon her to get something sealed in her

    Ch 49 V.2 Chapter 20
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
    Replied to MetaQuill

    bro Sunday is over but there is no new chapter🥲🥲

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 New Abilities
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    yeah she was a Kusa nin

    Ch 123 Karin Uzumaki
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
    Commented

    huh

    Ch 47 V.2 Chapter 18
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
    Replied to wap100

    summoning contract doesn't necessarily mean sage mode and moreover if bats does have sage mode , it will be difficult to practice as his chakra is condensed due to chakra core . So basically Yami getting cursed seal is a quick power up until he is able to himself learn sage mode. Cursed seal makes host compatible with orochimaru chakra when using it. Cursed seal increase strength and enhances chakra volume so in conclusion to this chapter Yami will only get nature energy which increases his strength as cursed seal is isolated from his chakra pathway due to chakra core Yami won't have any increase in chakra volume and won't get in contact with orochimaru chakra.

    Ch 122 Orochimaru's Curse Seal
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    It is castrated version of sage mode.I understand what author is doing making Yami exploit this seal until he is able to make his own sage mode as his would be different because of chakra core. I just hope Yami could make his sage mode early and devour that cursed seal.

    Ch 122 Orochimaru's Curse Seal
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
    Replied to lazarus898

    personally I think outside assistance ain't that good moreover he is getting stronger by himself so i think only thing Yami achieved is preventing orochimaru from targeting sasuke.

    He then again looked in that direction and said "Looks like I will have to take my leave. Experience the power my gift will give you and if you want more then come and find me...Yami Uchiha." Orochimaru said as he ran away deeper into the forest.
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    One moment of silence for fatty-kun 😔😔

    Ch 66 Chapter 66 Ito's Grievance
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    in ninja power system , which category does he belong to at present. High kage , Super kage , God of Shinobi (Hashirama & Madara) , Quasi Sage of Six Path(incomplete jinchuriki of jubii) , Sage of Six Paths (Madara jinchuriki of jubi) , Hogoromo Otsutsuki , Honorable mention : Teuchi Otsutsuki.

    Ch 45 V.2 Chapter 16
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
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    i don't want to say anything but i guess ur approach is more optimistic and saving every major side characters.

    Ch 116 The 2nd Test Part 1
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  • Jatin_friGus563
    Jatin_friGus5631yr
    Commented

    opm or one piece

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 New Abilities
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