Truhaun
I love hololive and death metal. Favorite bands: Cattle Decapitiation and Kanonenfieber đ„ I also play bass, piano, and guitar. I love depressing stories.
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I actually love that transition, the writing in this story is just đ
world building is nice. I'll admit, sometimes I catch myself just waiting for something to happen, but I feel like all this buildup will lead to something good. additionally there are some flaws with grammar, but not to the point where one cannot understand the sentences. In the end i'd say this is pretty entertaining and promising. I'm not gonna be hard on the reviews since this is webnovel, not some highly acclaimed published. I should also say that I am only 30 chpt in, so I am sure that there will be improvement. overall this book does its job of entertaining me relatively well. I'd give it a read if you've got nothing else to do.
"'...is a serious matter,' Cleo explained seriously." Made me chuckle ngl
poor guy đ€Ł
nothing wrong with science. shows that the author did their research
how does she weigh a much as an adult male when she is a 5 year old lol
bad as in this world considers it bad?
"even though she was a boy" what?
Lol he checks out every girl under the sun even his family
Lmao
Also, even though the Unovan Syndicate arc was long, it was still really exciting and enjoyable and it made this moment 10x more rewarding and also made the negative mental impact that it had on her seem more realistic. That's just how i see it though. You're really skilled at writing so enjoyed it regardless!