TFTC

TFTC

If you want to see something innovative it won't be here the existence of the MC doesn't change anything in the story it's easier to go read the manga everything from the beginning remains the same nothing has changed maybe Ichigo got stronger pre-war but that's it, other than that who spends 90% of the story with all the Shinigami underestimating him, even common Shinigami underestimated him A CAPTAIN that a Bankai is needed to be in this position, being something rare to reach with people taking hundreds of years to reach such a level, in short this is a huge waste of time, it's better to read the manga

I feel like it was a waste of time following this until now I waited so long for the MC to really fight to have this it's sad I'm going to drop it it's no longer for me maybe some people like it but it's not to my liking anymore

that was very weird

Feliz natal meu querido

How long will the MC hide his power? because honestly this plot of everyone despising him is very boring, to be honest I wanted to drop the story but I like the concept so I'm still insisting

Chega fi cabou a graça lança isso aí por favor

Bora corno libera isso logo

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Amigo tão traduzindo sua fanfic e ganhando dinheiro com isso aqui msm no webnovel da uma olhada aí

Is this set before the thousand year war? Did it take him a while to realize he was in another universe? and will he still be a devoted servant of yhwach?

would astrape be Europe's spear in GC?

an interesting concept what do you want to do with the techniques, I suggest adding new skills with similar spatial concepts

I read all the reviews and although I agree with all of them, I think people were too harsh for someone who has never written a story (welcome to the webnovel), I think the story would be a solid 3 stars.

friend, I'll be honest with you, the premise of the story is very good, but the execution leaves something to be desired, the personality of the MC is something to work on, because with a Kido system I would expect someone more intelligent, I also expected it to just be used from Kido to Zampakuto kind of disappointed me, also something more personal but I honestly found him very gullible knowing how the world of Bleach is even knowing Urahara I would hardly trust him much, there is a lot to improve in the story but the potential if executed well is Great, I recommend writing a few more chapters and then rewriting the story and fixing your mistakes.

Dude, I think you're overestimating what low level spells can do, because that way a 99 hado will be able to level an entire country

Melhor escritor atual daqui não desista por causa de alguns haters 90% dos usuários do webnovel são retardados

I don't like sociopathic Mc's so for me it ends here

Will MC remain an emotionless robot or will that change? and how long will it take?