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Ozem

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  • Ozem
    Ozem4mth
    Commented

    TFTC

    Ch 3 Chapter 03
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    A Visionary's Fairy Tail
    Anime & Comics · QuincyEcht
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  • Ozem
    Ozem4mth
    Commented

    TFTC

    Ch 2 Chapter 02
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    A Visionary's Fairy Tail
    Anime & Comics · QuincyEcht
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  • Ozem
    Ozem4mth
    Posted

    If you want to see something innovative it won't be here the existence of the MC doesn't change anything in the story it's easier to go read the manga everything from the beginning remains the same nothing has changed maybe Ichigo got stronger pre-war but that's it, other than that who spends 90% of the story with all the Shinigami underestimating him, even common Shinigami underestimated him A CAPTAIN that a Bankai is needed to be in this position, being something rare to reach with people taking hundreds of years to reach such a level, in short this is a huge waste of time, it's better to read the manga

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    [Being rewritten]
    Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
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  • Ozem
    Ozem4mth
    Commented

    I feel like it was a waste of time following this until now I waited so long for the MC to really fight to have this it's sad I'm going to drop it it's no longer for me maybe some people like it but it's not to my liking anymore

    Ch 56 Gremmy vs. the Zaraki Boi
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    [Being rewritten]
    Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
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  • Ozem
    Ozem4mth
    Commented

    that was very weird

    Ch 31 Chapter 031
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    Beta Testing the Apocalypse
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • Ozem
    Ozem4mth
    Commented

    Feliz natal meu querido

    Ch 76 Dawn Of Super Heroes
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
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  • Ozem
    Ozem6mth
    Commented

    How long will the MC hide his power? because honestly this plot of everyone despising him is very boring, to be honest I wanted to drop the story but I like the concept so I'm still insisting

    Ch 18 Talk with Shunsui
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    [Being rewritten]
    Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
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  • Ozem
    Ozem6mth
    Commented

    Chega fi cabou a graça lança isso aí por favor

    Ch 68 World Of Pirates: Part 06
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
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  • Ozem
    Ozem6mth
    Commented

    Bora corno libera isso logo

    Ch 68 World Of Pirates: Part 06
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
    Anime & Comics · EvansKannon
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  • Ozem
    Ozem6mth
    Replied to LordVoid

    Tem como denunciar plágio na webnovel e eles removem depois você denuncia lá no patreon dele

    Ch 99 Bar Oblivion.
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    DC: The Prince Of The Underworld (PT-BR)
    Anime & Comics · LordVoid
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  • Ozem
    Ozem6mth
    Commented

    Amigo tão traduzindo sua fanfic e ganhando dinheiro com isso aqui msm no webnovel da uma olhada aí

    Ch 99 Bar Oblivion.
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    DC: The Prince Of The Underworld (PT-BR)
    Anime & Comics · LordVoid
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  • Ozem
    Ozem7mth
    Commented

    Is this set before the thousand year war? Did it take him a while to realize he was in another universe? and will he still be a devoted servant of yhwach?

    Ch 6 Thoughts and Night
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    Fate/Quincy
    Anime & Comics · QuincyEcht
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  • Ozem
    Ozem7mth
    Commented

    would astrape be Europe's spear in GC?

    Ch -1 Character Bio - Valaine (Spoiler)
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    [DC x Overlord] Bloodbound
    Anime & Comics · Zerviil
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  • Ozem
    Ozem7mth
    Commented

    an interesting concept what do you want to do with the techniques, I suggest adding new skills with similar spatial concepts

    Ch 1 Now this is truly strange
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    As Satoru Gojo in the DC Universe
    Anime & Comics · Ekisdaiou
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  • Ozem
    Ozem7mth
    Replied to Ozem

    I read all the reviews and although I agree with all of them, I think people were too harsh for someone who has never written a story (welcome to the webnovel), I think the story would be a solid 3 stars.

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    Kido System in Bleach
    Anime & Comics · ridhibrata_das
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  • Ozem
    Ozem7mth
    Posted

    friend, I'll be honest with you, the premise of the story is very good, but the execution leaves something to be desired, the personality of the MC is something to work on, because with a Kido system I would expect someone more intelligent, I also expected it to just be used from Kido to Zampakuto kind of disappointed me, also something more personal but I honestly found him very gullible knowing how the world of Bleach is even knowing Urahara I would hardly trust him much, there is a lot to improve in the story but the potential if executed well is Great, I recommend writing a few more chapters and then rewriting the story and fixing your mistakes.

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    Kido System in Bleach
    Anime & Comics · ridhibrata_das
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  • Ozem
    Ozem8mth
    Commented

    Dude, I think you're overestimating what low level spells can do, because that way a 99 hado will be able to level an entire country

    Ch 15 Ch-15: Desperate Encounters
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    Kido System in Bleach
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  • Ozem
    Ozem9mth
    Commented

    Melhor escritor atual daqui não desista por causa de alguns haters 90% dos usuários do webnovel são retardados

    Ch 62 Notes (It's a rant)
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    Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
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  • Ozem
    Ozem9mth
    Commented

    I don't like sociopathic Mc's so for me it ends here

    Ch 4 Chapter 4 (Departure is near)
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    Template system in Bleach
    Anime & Comics · DarknessAuthor
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  • Ozem
    Ozem9mth
    Commented

    Will MC remain an emotionless robot or will that change? and how long will it take?

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