Lal_CrocusMist
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Hello! I am very sorry if I am out of bounds for the last couple of months. I had a tough writer's block that it was hard to even come up with even just anything. I also felt discouraged of things that I lack interest of just about anything I usually do. I hope that you will remain patient and supportive like the usual. Thank you very much for the understanding and the unending love and warmth you offer me. Keep safe, and keep growing and creating!. My deepest regards!
the book is very interesting. it has the romance that most people want. the energy the book gives and how you described the characters works its wonders. I just have a suggestion, pls refrain from being redundant. I know, we sometimes don't notice it but we eventually do it. like, try to not explain the infos you already gave. but story-wise, you have an interesting plot there.
So there's something that's been bothering me after reading this, and its those little quirky objects or symbols you have. I don't know if it has something to do with the story but it sometimes catches my attention more than the plot making me a bit confused for a sec. And also I noticed the dialogues. You use the symbols on it too, and sometimes do not or with a different one on the next chapter. May I suggest that you stick to another symbol like how or what others use (") or just use your own preference, no matter what symbol it is just make it consistent. But story wise, it is an interesting book! the descriptions are so nice, I thought I am watching a movie, well for me and through my imagination of course, but it is so vivid and cute especially the science stuffs. I do not know if it is legit or mixed but it adds a sprinkle to the story. Keep it up! gonna put this inside my pocket for emergency reading purposes with mah other stuffs for future use. hehe
Boring day to day rituals before and after school but everyday is something to look forward too.. I suddenly miss going to school eventho I was lazy to get up for it sometimes.
nice descriptions🙌