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Lal_CrocusMist

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I like learning new things.

2021-01-13 JoinedGlobal
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Posted

    Hello! I am very sorry if I am out of bounds for the last couple of months. I had a tough writer's block that it was hard to even come up with even just anything. I also felt discouraged of things that I lack interest of just about anything I usually do. I hope that you will remain patient and supportive like the usual. Thank you very much for the understanding and the unending love and warmth you offer me. Keep safe, and keep growing and creating!. My deepest regards!

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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Replied to _afrikan_5724

    thank you!馃

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    El Viajero
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Replied to Lal_CrocusMist

    no big deal馃

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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Replied to _afrikan_5724

    just the usual errors.. typographical and such.

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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Posted

    The descriptions are so vivid, I thought I am a part of the book. I like how you artistically use words for us to be teleported in a new dimension. Reading this makes me happy! a few errors but not noticeable enough to ruin the plot. Nicely done!

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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Posted

    the book is very interesting. it has the romance that most people want. the energy the book gives and how you described the characters works its wonders. I just have a suggestion, pls refrain from being redundant. I know, we sometimes don't notice it but we eventually do it. like, try to not explain the infos you already gave. but story-wise, you have an interesting plot there.

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    A Possessive Mafia Leader
    Urban4Maggievasiredz
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Replied to Lal_CrocusMist

    it's fine.. you gave us enough insight with the prologue. it's a powerful start. more power馃槈

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    Caroline
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Posted

    Intriguing! I like how you playfully wrote the chapters giving an insight into the beautiful romance to watch out for. but isn't too early for you to paywall the chapters? Well, the author knows what she's doing so I trust what surprises you have for us! Wish you all the best!

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    Caroline
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Posted

    I like how realistic the book was written. The conversations are of in time and one would relate and would somehow connect the deeper you get into the book. Nicely done.

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    LIFE IN 2021
    HorrorGreatwrites
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Posted

    So there's something that's been bothering me after reading this, and its those little quirky objects or symbols you have. I don't know if it has something to do with the story but it sometimes catches my attention more than the plot making me a bit confused for a sec. And also I noticed the dialogues. You use the symbols on it too, and sometimes do not or with a different one on the next chapter. May I suggest that you stick to another symbol like how or what others use (") or just use your own preference, no matter what symbol it is just make it consistent. But story wise, it is an interesting book! the descriptions are so nice, I thought I am watching a movie, well for me and through my imagination of course, but it is so vivid and cute especially the science stuffs. I do not know if it is legit or mixed but it adds a sprinkle to the story. Keep it up! gonna put this inside my pocket for emergency reading purposes with mah other stuffs for future use. hehe

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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Commented

    Boring day to day rituals before and after school but everyday is something to look forward too.. I suddenly miss going to school eventho I was lazy to get up for it sometimes.

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    Outlandish impulse
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Commented

    Too much name to remember for the first chapter, a bit of editing but not recognizable enough to affect te story... Hands up to the science stuff, and to the interesting start to get fellas hooked and jumping for more!

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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Commented

    nice descriptions馃檶

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    Outlandish impulse
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Posted

    this book is sounds exciting and interesting. It has this unique sense that makes it more appealing. I like how it is futuristic and sounds so fun. nicely done!

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    It All Started At Hi!!! School (My unexpected someone)
    FantasyDrasthxce
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist2yr
    Replied to Scarlettheartt

    thank you so much, pretty. I appreciate your help in writing this book馃槉馃樁

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    El Viajero
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist3yr
    Posted

    Yieee.. did not expect that this book is THAT good! so glad I had the chance to read this. The author's imaginative mind made my mind twirl in wonder馃挅馃挅 waiting for more.馃

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    My Obsession
    UrbanD2D-Dare2Dream
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist3yr
    Posted

    this is a very intriguing book! I like how it makes you think about how will you spend the remaining days of your life, coz it did to me! the author has an imaginative mind! so good! hoping for more updates馃槞

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    60 DAYS
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist3yr
    Posted

    Nice book! I like how it gives emphasis to what a girl can do.. As a woman myself, It is very empowering. I'm also glad that it is a completed book, making me at ease for I can read it as much as I want馃 more stories from you!

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    Lost in Neverland
    FantasySasansala Sandaruwani
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist3yr
    Replied to Nhelle_Joy_Dan

    Wow..so grateful I get to be your ticket to travel places you want to go. Its one of the reasons I wrote this..馃挅 so glad I made you happy馃

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    El Viajero
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  • Lal_CrocusMist
    Lal_CrocusMist3yr
    Posted

    Sooo muchhh love!!! so happy I found this book馃挅 liking how original the plot is and how it pulls you deeper, wanting to get to know more of Mr. Heights and Ms. Parkers.. so excited to know how this will end up.

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    THE LOVE I NEVER KNEW
    UrbanHAJRA N. ABDEL
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