Review Detail of Lal_CrocusMist in A Possessive Mafia Leader

the book is very interesting. it has the romance that most people want. the energy the book gives and how you described the characters works its wonders. I just have a suggestion, pls refrain from being redundant. I know, we sometimes don't notice it but we eventually do it. like, try to not explain the infos you already gave. but story-wise, you have an interesting plot there.