Review Detail of Lal_CrocusMist in Outlandish impulse

So there's something that's been bothering me after reading this, and its those little quirky objects or symbols you have. I don't know if it has something to do with the story but it sometimes catches my attention more than the plot making me a bit confused for a sec. And also I noticed the dialogues. You use the symbols on it too, and sometimes do not or with a different one on the next chapter. May I suggest that you stick to another symbol like how or what others use (") or just use your own preference, no matter what symbol it is just make it consistent. But story wise, it is an interesting book! the descriptions are so nice, I thought I am watching a movie, well for me and through my imagination of course, but it is so vivid and cute especially the science stuffs. I do not know if it is legit or mixed but it adds a sprinkle to the story. Keep it up! gonna put this inside my pocket for emergency reading purposes with mah other stuffs for future use. hehe