the author/translator has tone down the caps which is good but I still feel they use it too much. it adds 0 emotional impact. caps should be a rare but short resource. if it's so common then it just becomes more of annoyance than anything
i dont remember this what chapter?
disagreed in anti god there are lots of times where information is withheld for no reason. when it would make sense since characters have the information but decide not to share for whatever reason. It is true you try to make your novels more mysterious for no reason. and hiding behind an excuse of that "your characters are the reason behind your writing skills" is a terrible excuse.
cant blame you for that. this novel is extremely average from where I read nothing new and follows the same copy paste formula of every other cultivation novel. Which chapter did you drop it at?
just dont think about it. this novel is turning into a novel where I need to shut off my brain to enjoy it
I know this is two months old but I simply stopped reading to let the chapters build up. I like binging so ill wait a little bit more for more chapters then binge them, then wait another year for the stockpile to grow. rinse and repeat
mainly because he needs to learn to defend against against that spoiler magic. and since thats pretty much torture best have a way to make sure they dont run. All mages of those type do it for good reason. and principle make no sense here. and principle definitely doesn't make sense in an alternate world.
authors other book worm sovereign
These are reviews where I think the author should delete. The author already gave credit to douluo dalu in his notes and if you actually read the the synopsis you'll find after giving credit they are working on their own cover. Also most covers on this site are from google images and what not. pathetic review
well I feel like you skimmed pass a lot of things maybe a chapter or two because everything was explained. and people were angry about it but since it was only temporary for a few years and the debt he owed among the fact that they knew his master won't hurt him they let it slide. Besides doing ordinary disciple things the master doesn't make him do anything slave like
hope it doesn't stay like this the im from earth is the dumbest thing that ever came out of novels. I don't know a single person that won't kill if their lives in danger. even in the military I don't know anyone that had a issue. this is a Terrible trope
i had voracity from overlord playing while finding this comment. all things balanced as they should be
the gods came from ymir I believe so in the story they instead came from the tree I don't think it matters
those internal dialogues had purpose this is just used to either justify the author and/or break the fourth wall. I agree it was fine at first but now it getting annoying to the point where lots of people will drop this novel. which is a shame this novel has potential and would be really dumb to get ruined over something stupid like this
why? you'll outlive whatever planet your on. if a star goes supernova you'll have to endure that. afterwards you'll be left in the void of space for eternity unless you hit by a comet. but even then you'll feel pain you're entire existence will become hell
forgot to mention author has loads of books so I can see burn out and discontinued books in the future since this one is a gem so far(chapter 23) hopefully this doesn't end up in the discard pile. the amount of books leads to great worry for the future of these series
Great novel will come back in a year where hopefully there will be a stock pile of chapters. Hope he stays in the dungeon for a long time. also hope MC doesn't just go back to help humans after how he was treated and what he witness of society. no one likes a goodie to shoes mc.
I have my concerns for your novels but the fact you didn't use caps already is a plus