Battledays
Hello BattleDays here, a name I’ve using for years. I’ve only found this site after some recommend it. But I am a frequent writer though most of my works are on paper, I hope I can upload them here.
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Battledays1yrPostedDespite its flaws, this is a better example of the topic of exploiting knowledge of the future for your advantage, which is rather frustrating. The first few chapters have a terrific opening and a really badass MC, but after that, the characters get more 2D and expendable, there is a lot of face-slapping, and the MC starts bragging. The main character doesn't give a damn whether his actions change the outcome; in fact, he welcomes them as brand-new opportunities to take advantage of. It occasionally falls victim to a Deus ex machina, where he easily finds the blueprint, he needs or unearths a prize that helps him in his future conflict. However, I appreciate his unusual thinking and the answers he proposes. It also doesn't appear to have been created on the spot because there is evidence of foreshadowing and references to earlier characters and storylines, which indicate there was at least some thought behind it. There are some amusing and a few marginally thought-provoking moments, but overall, you get the incredibly frustrating sense that you were duped, which is extremely upsetting. It's not a bad story, don't get me wrong, but it reads more like a wuxia novel than a science fiction one. This tale has so much untapped potential, and a lot of it feels like it was taken advantage of by the author before being given flimsy explanations for why and how it is happening. If we examine this book from the viewpoint of the actual army and other characters, we can see that the main character is incredibly stupid, immature, and crazy. Even though I enjoy Smart MC and am fine with him being crazy, it worries me when you show that a random player with average talent is smarter than the officers, the government, etc. It's a completely different story. Basically, I believe the author has a weak understanding of reality.
- Battledays1yrCommented
Anthony gotta get on that leg day grind, his legs are weak,
It's so damn hot! My claws are instantly burning and I madly hop my way forward to avoid the burning sensation rocketing up my legs. - Battledays1yrCommented
Perfectly good ding,
~Ding~ - Battledays1yrCommented
Surprised snek-guy didn't do this ding Anyway, ding but invisible
~Ding~ - Battledays1yrCommented
THAT'S WHY IT WAS SO DUMB AND BARE BONES >_<
PERMISSION TO ACTIVATE COMPUTATIONAL A.I.: Granted - Battledays1yrCommented
This got me crying bruh, like for real...
"They're not even your real children, and you still treat them like that..?" Felix asked as he started to freak out even more, "You've got to be joking with me..." He practically sobbed, and Eiro just looked down at him. - Battledays1yrCommented
The moment I saw Immortal Edition I knew
"She is attempting to perfect a new archetype of heavy armour. Specifically, the Mark 10 Layered Armour, Immortal edition." - Battledays1yrCommented
The guards right now
My guards and I continued to enjoy the hospitality of the Colony within the second stratum and I must say the sights I beheld were quite beyond my expectations. - Battledays1yrCommented
He's a pokemon, an Ice-type pokemon...
Since "even a dog has a name", Sui Xiong named the five practices—or magics—respectively: "Cryo Beam", "Frost Armor", "Ice Blocking", "Ice Knife" and "Ice Bombardment". To be honest, these names didn't sound all that cool to him. Some of them even seemed kinda dumb. But it was fine with him if they sounded stupid, as long as they were useful. - Battledays1yrCommentedThen, he suddenly felt that there was something wrong. Where were his legs! Where was his body! It was common sense that he could still see his legs and body if he lowered his head, but Sui Xiong could see nothing whatsoever. Well, technically speaking, he could see something vague, a transparent contour, kind of similar to a human figure. Underneath the transparent contour was the clear sea water, and in the water, he could see fish and shrimp milling about. But, what did this have to do with him? Where had his legs and body gone? Was the transparent contour all he had left?
- Battledays1yrReplied to zzzephCh 844 Origins of the Call (955)
- Battledays2yrCommented
Man, this scene, it just gave so much satisfaction, like I could imagine Anthony saying that in a cold tone, and Queen just being in awe, amazing.
[You disappoint me Queen] the monsters' voice chilled her mind again, [from beginning to end this matter has been…. too predictable]. - Battledays2yrCommented
bonk
I reach out with an antennae and tap the Queen on the head. Oi, translate. - Battledays3yrCommented
Bruh the author didn’t just do that!!!!
At that instant, as if it was an impulse brought by his memories, Aurus replied with, "Aw man." - Battledays3yrCommentedCh 58 Prehistoric Era.
- Battledays3yrCommented
You sure you’re not a arsonist?
"Burn...", he said with a glimmer in his eyes. - Battledays3yrCommentedCh 47 <Sword Aura Projectile> & Stage-3<Sword Aura>!