yes torture this monkeys they deserve it. the two elder mitokado and homura is not there. just take them too and torture, these konoha corrupt quartet deserve every beating they can get.

im disappointed with this outcome, for someone being known as a ninja with extreme personality, he didn't kill the guy who let his brother died and even destroy the life of his nephew while also targeting him to be killed or controlled.

what a let down, this novel starts good to best but it suddenly become a letdown because of a slave system trope, then the mc also become extreme person who enslave anyone out of little misunderstanding. i thought at first this novel is different coz the mc is just a person who doesn't care about anything but only his friend and love one. but he suddenly become a villain like mc because of the trial of white tiger. and now the mc doesn't care about morals he just enslave or kill anyone he think crossing his path. what a letdown but still thanks and hoping you do much better next time author-san.

i read the former novel before the newly rewritten story. and for me the former story is much better than the new. why? because even though the mc in the former novel is op atleast you can give him a little restrictions in the later chapters. but this new one? the mc starts weak yes, but having the memories of a million year old cultivator is much more op than the former mc. atleast the former mc become overpower only because of the system reward. on other one is the title will remain the same? coz i dont see any bar or tavern here that the mc can manage to visit different dimensions in the future..

they cant admit it dude. the moment they admit that everything was ordered by 2nd hokage, the people will think that the so called strongest hokage in history is a lie. this is a blow to hiruzen prestige, then the uchiha might use the issue why the 4th died early and people will think the 4th is more powerful so why hiruzen is alive and the 4th is dead? so another blow to his name, the 4 corrupt has no way here because the mc can use every issue that the 4 corrupt did in the past like the destruction of uzumaki and senju.

well the author wants his mc to follow the path of rich thats why, there's still a chance that the author will let the same fate that happen to uzumaki in canon in this novel. many of us hate the sarutobi&shimura village(konoha), but the mc wants to popularize his technology so he will entertain the konoha whether we like it or not.

waiting for a week just to left hanging. what a great author not even a shred of goodness towards his readers. now we wait for a week or a month again right?

this novel is good, im hoping the original plot of naruto will still happen like the destruction of uzumaki, senju, uchiha. but this time the mc will place everyone in genjutsu believing the 3 founder clan is gone, then in konoha crush plan of orochimaru the 3 clan will comeback to reclaim what stolen from them. of course it also good if minato kushina is alive. just a suggestion :)

i dont know why the mc wants to visit the konoha knowing the konoha right now is the most darkest village for these pokemon. with sarutobi and danzo leading them this pokemon might even received mistreatment, coz danzo will do everything to have the most advantage towards this pokemon thing and its benefits for having access to oasis world.

lol really dont know why the author giving riser a protagonist like treatment like this? he not only make himself more powerful he also copy the mc's technique with ease. the author make riser like the protagonist who grow while fighting a losing fight. so are we going to change the main character now? is riser the real protagonist of your novel? his domain expansion can be consider unique ability of him but now riser copied it so in the next chapter we will witness so many domain expansion user from devil faction.

why not make or raise your own force instead of taking a known marvel character who's loyalty is questionable.

noice chapter

lol dont let him join. we all know sukuna is a merciless being, if he join the group he will acquire more power than the power he holds. yes he cant hurt any member of the group but who says he cant hurt or kill their loved ones? so stop that kind of a headache plot.

i only read like 4 chapters before leaving i really dont like this kind of mc who has so much pride of himself, and too many complaints about other people because he read it or watch it in anime. he judge them base on the anime he knows, then call the others simp.

i read a novel with a similar diary system, idk if this novel is the translation of that novel or not. but i hoping the system wont give reward to those woman who will be mention in the diary, this is the reason why i stop reading that novel. coz in the plot kaya become a marine with a similar or more powerful physique than big mom, because of the system reward,so when gion found out about the reward she actively targeted the mc so that the mc will mention her more in the diary to be given a reward related to sword talent.

with this kind of playful attitude towards danzo. there's a chance that danzo will escape or call for another reinforcement, or danzo might use shisui's eye against him we dont even know if his immune to genjutsu attack.

i thought this is a naruto fanfic? why it suddenly become a cultivation world?

the hype and goosebumps is. thanks for the good chapter author~