good chapter 👍

thanks for the chapter

be tough bro life always bout challenges anyway thanks for the chapter good read

when did it change to harem genre im pretty sute it wasn't there before

good luck 👌 can't wait for the updates

thanks for the chapter 👍

no harem pls

thanks for the chapter 👍

nice please update as soon as possible thanks for the chap

nice plot twist there 😂

yo don't rush too much on the romance take it slow 👌 anyways tqs for the chap👍

minor grammar issues but overall good chapter 👍

lol nice work with new chap

Can you give a layout on the direction of the story which village he's gonna stay in whether he's op or not etc Overall good start just hope you can tell what to expect.

Hope they keep the main ships

Story is pretty good but could use some improvements. I'm no expert just giving some suggestions from novels I've read don't know if it can be incorporated in your novel tho. - Try making some space when a dialogue happens between characters maybe one line for each character - Add some character dev for side character makes it more interesting ( i think) - Should not be too op else there no struggle rivalry like deku and kacchan