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All of this work seems like pointless damage control. It’s likely that. every single one of these events is orchestrated by Obito using genjutsu. He probably controlled the Kaguya clan to go crazy. He probably did this instigation with the Yuki clan, too. Meanwhile, the MC is sending people to the Rain village to collect information he already knows. When he should have leaked all the information on the Akatsuki to all the villages, including information about the Rinnegan, all the members, that Obito Uchiha is masquerading as Madara and has a Mangekyo Sharingan which allows him to teleport into every single village unimpeded and turn intangible - and that he’s attempted to put the Mizukage into a genjutsu to begin killing off bloodline clans(a little white lie because he hasn’t done that yet). The goal should be to turn the entire shinobi world against the Akatsuki. There’s no way the villages would hire the Akatsuki knowing the leader has an ability to magically appear in every Kage’s office and can control their minds. They’ll order the destruction of the group.
I’m dropping this fic. It’s dragging too much. The fact he doesn’t have his full memories and he keeps getting plagued by Deja Vu? It’s annoying. And it’s not enjoyable to read. Change the story to give him his full memories from the beginning. Maybe then it’ll be entertaining.