New chapter please?

Bro writing a story but lacking creativity

New chapter, where bro?

Absolute peak indeed. For dxd fics, this one is really a fresh air. No rias route plot, no forced chess game with sona, no killing issei, no stealing boosted gear. But It seems that the author has no experience in writing action scenes, of course it just a minor flaw. It's still worth to read

Honestly I prefer the kind of story where MC can wander around and sleep with women, just like your caretaker fics.

Tftc. I can't wait for the time mc meets jingliu or sterelon hunter

This fic is very long and boring. With a schedule of 2 chapters per week and more than 40 chapters per arc, it would need about 5 months to clearing 1 arc. Dang, that's fkin long, yes? and the worst thing is that the character development is really bad and didn't have any improvement... That's suck

TFTC. May I know your updates schedule?

Sorry mate I just can't, I haven't even reached chapter 10 yet and I can't keep going. The story is too boring and the plot holes in the beginning have made me lazy to read it. Mc suddenly came out of nowhere and got the plot armor, op system, and op starter pack. Just from seeing all that, I know that the character development won't be good. Mc's personalities is also very flat and emo. Also how the author wrote scathach's character is really a big flaw. Even if she gets nerfed, the only thing that decreases is her physical strength and her abilities will remain intact. And instead of act as a wise teacher she is more like a puppy who always follows behind mc. I will recommend you to rewriting it with more solid story plans and a better characters development

Sorry buddy, but I'll take my old review. This fic is very chinese, so much chinese references and it feels like I'm reading some xianxia bullsh– than reading a genshin fic and I can't handle it cz it's so weird for me. It just not my cup of a coffee, how sad

This fic is decent, there's nothing special about MC's personality, he's so flat and boring. Right now, he just looks like your everyday Japanese slice of life normal protagonist. I hope he gets some character development as soon as possible. Also, what's wrong with Genben Shinji? As a man he is a jerk and you turned him into her and made her a bitc–?

As long you can upload 1 chp/ 2 or 3 day i think it's okay. And i think people like your other fics cz they are more familiar with dxd than gbf

Gave them SAM armor, that's a better equipment than using TSF model

Kyrie eleson go brrrrr

TFTC. Can't you edit his name, nguyen ryou is makes my tongue really itchy. Also, what's wrong with Chinese mtl using half Vietnam half Japanese name, that's strange. And i think Nguyen and ruan has the same meaning, ruan ryou is much better than freakin nguyen

Any romance, harem so far?

Because why not? She lived in ancient Greece and we all know how relationships worked in ancient Greece.

Eh that's all? I thought medea will be in harem... What a shame

Cz he is a simp

Fking simp