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LunaKindred
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Sorry mate I just can't, I haven't even reached chapter 10 yet and I can't keep going. The story is too boring and the plot holes in the beginning have made me lazy to read it. Mc suddenly came out of nowhere and got the plot armor, op system, and op starter pack. Just from seeing all that, I know that the character development won't be good. Mc's personalities is also very flat and emo. Also how the author wrote scathach's character is really a big flaw. Even if she gets nerfed, the only thing that decreases is her physical strength and her abilities will remain intact. And instead of act as a wise teacher she is more like a puppy who always follows behind mc. I will recommend you to rewriting it with more solid story plans and a better characters development

Into the Infinite of animes and fictions!! Starting with the system!!

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Yeah I know, i am editing all the chapters and fixing all the plot holes. But the later chapters are good tho.