Thanks for the chapter

I recommend you stick with Marvin's POV, but you can occasionally switch to other character POVs If needed. Just make sure that it is clear who's POV we are reading.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter again, there are already clear improvements from the first few chapters. Well done!

Well written chapter, the action is easy to follow. Great job!

Thanks for the chapter, take your time and write at your own pace, there is no need to rush.

Depends on what his height/build will be. I do think that with his calm demeanour and analytical thinking, he would be a really good QB.

Thanks for the chapters, great story so far.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the new chapter! Will you post tour new story here as well?

Thanks for the chapter! How many chapters is this story ahead on your p.a.t.r.e.o.n?

Thanks for the chapter

Hey, do you have a release schedule for this novel?

Thanks for the chapter! I'm curious to see the future issues that he has to overcome!

Very good basketball novel, for now, characters are slightly underdeveloped, but it makes sense, since at the time of writing, the story only has less than 20 chapters. Nevertheless, it is certainly worth your time, I highly recommend it.

Hey, is there a Discord for this novel?