Very good basketball novel, for now, characters are slightly underdeveloped, but it makes sense, since at the time of writing, the story only has less than 20 chapters. Nevertheless, it is certainly worth your time, I highly recommend it.
I hope he does not, he is not a striker, and is playing against legit opponents, honestly, if he got top scorer, it would be ridiculous, considering that football is a team sport.
I understand what you are saying, however, do remember that at the end of the day, he is a kid. He streams and plays, but also does other stuff, but don't worry, if you read on, you will find that he plays a lot more. Think about another factor as well, he is less than eighteen, at that age, you are unable to participate in most official LAN tournaments, which are the major tournaments, he cannot exactly join a team to play competitively (yet). Regardless, I appreciate your comment, it keeps me on my toes, and its wonderful to see that someone cares enough about my novel to post a 'rant' as you call it. :)
Thank you so much for your support, it really does mean a lot. As of now, I have a lot of work, but once the holidays begin, I might be able to get more chapters out.
Wonderful book, with no spelling or grammar mistake whatsoever The wroldbuilding is excellent, and while it is still early, there is certainly a semblance of what is to come, whilst also keeping an air of mystery. I am really looking forward to more, and congrats on a wonderful story.
Thank you for your review! Right now, my updating stability is bad due to the amount of workload I have, but once it does reduce, I will hopefully be able to update more often.
Basically a mental DDOS attack