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Wow! My review is an honest one! I've only once watch a movie about vampires and werewolves, I've never read a book about it but now. your book got me into that genres. And I've loved what I've read, I like the plot, the fighting spirit and the Angeline's name. It's really an interesting book and I look forward to reading more. Will surely vote. Keep it up there! You did a great job đđ
4.8/5 because I want you to continue and finish this and not give up halfway :). First of all, the plot was cool. I like how the story was progressing - not so fast, but not too slow either. The pace was just right. Your story is already good as it is, but please proofread some of the chapters when you have time. I saw a bit of tense inconsistency here and there, but Iâm sure it wonât affect the readersâ experience too much, at least for me. Keep up the good work!
To say this story is interesting is an understatement, I love the way the characters carry themselves and am I down for some drama, the tension was well established, the intrigue is also there, what a wonderful plot, I really recommend, this book deserves the attention it's getting. 5 stars![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
As an author who's failed at writing romance, I have a deep respect of those who succeed in the genre. And You're Just One Kissâa paranormal romance of vampires, werewolves, and hot female protagonistsâis interesting enough that I quickly devoured those opening chapters like a kid with his candy bar. ;p The grammar's good, which is a huge plus on a platform like Webnovel. Punctuation's mostly spot on too. At least I hadn't seen any glaring issues apart from some sentence structure problems in the early chapters. Nothing that breaks immersion though. Pacing's good. Everything's moving fast enough that the reader will keep wanting to turn the page. Story kind of reminds me of Twilightâand not just because the wolf guy's name is Jacobâbut there are similar tropes between the two that I can't help comparing them. That's not to say this isn't an original work. It is. And that becomes clearer the longer you read. Especially because vampires don't sparkle in this tale. LOL. Characters â Angeline's a strong protagonist. Nothing at all like Bella (Sorry again for the comparison). Jacob and Mallory (I love this vamp's name) are also solid characters with interesting quirks that make them stand apart from the generic handsome male protagonist saturating most romance titles. As for side characters, I'll get back to you once I've read more about them. ;P All in all, a good read, one worthy of standing out among Webnovel's legions of romance titles. This one is definitely worth your time so go read it!