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FavourEkele_1969

FavourEkele_1969

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I'm Batman Read [My Predator System] on Meganovel Username: DanTheLion

2021-07-12 JoinedNigeria
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_196910mth
    Replied to DaoistVSQ12r

    Gracias

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    Hard to Choose
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Replied to Raito_Kawari

    Thanks man

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Shadow Recruit
    Teen · FavourEkele_1969
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Posted

    The grammar is fantastic, albeit some errors, it's still polished...great buildup, amazing character, world building, thrilling action scenes which is outstanding amongst other qualities...I feel the premise could have been as compelling as the progressive chapters (2)... but I sense that this is a book no one should miss. it's got potential and there is still room for improvement.[img=recommend]

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    BLAKE: DEMON SLAYER
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Replied to godlycat_

    😂😂😂 Thank you 😂

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    My Animal System
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Posted

    Grammar's decent. Progression's a bit slow. The tension's a little overwhelming. IMHO, the FL is overbearing as h*ll. But she is a bit relatable. The male lead has guts, appeal and stuff. I understand this is a cop novel but I don't really enjoy excessive vulgarity. The character POV's a turnoff but I understand it does capture the attention of readers' that it's looking for. just work on making them less annoying. I really hope the story thrives beyond author's expectations.

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    Justice And Desire
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Replied to CaptainBoyHole

    Bruh, when was this? Just curious😅. I'm trying to keep an open mind. I've written romance novels before.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: The beginning
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    My Animal System
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Replied to BrewingFantasies

    Thank you😁

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: The beginning
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    My Animal System
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Replied to Dortexus

    lol🤣🤣

    It was sunny today on the seventeenth of April. Maks Anderson checked his phone for the current weather report and it just passed 87 degrees.
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    My Animal System
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Replied to NLinCH

    😁😁😁

    "21...22....23...24....25...20..."
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    My Animal System
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Replied to NLinCH

    Thank you!

    Ch 1 Chapter 29: Confessions
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    My Animal System
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Posted

    A suspenseful slowburn story that easily gets readers immersed into it. A dash of steamy scenes to go along. Some interesting characters like Eric. I'd like to learn more about his background. The story keeps you guessing. The writing style is par with the gothic element. It's good.👍

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    My Dark Angel Prince: Trapped in Death’s Embrace
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Replied to reader_iam

    Thanks for the info. I will drop the bad words. 😅 Thanks for the encouragement.

    Ch 7 We get sporty I guess
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    Velocity.
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Posted

    ML is 12 so forgive him if he's acting dumb or reckless ok? FL Is the opposite. It will be comedic. I will develop the background and build the characters to the best of my ability. Cheers😁✌

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    Velocity.
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Replied to Metalloid

    my point exactly

    Since I don't remember my name, more like I don't remember anything personal, I remember what and when I did things, but I don't remember...me?(name, age, family…), so I got a new one. And since I love beasts, I was looking for the wolf shifter, but color me surprised, I found that not only there is wolf shifter but other kinds too, I mean there is a giraffe, horse, mise and other shifters there, probably have something related to "AU" part, so I chose the king of the jungle. And for the talent part, it allow me to choose 3 from A LONG list 'I wish they put a search function there, so I chose scientist talent that gives a boost on any science learning experience, a crafter talent that makes me genies in making things, perfect combo with scientist if I say, and last one cause I love arts from all colors, so why not?
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    In Twilight as Lion king
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Replied to NLinCH

    Thanks man. I'll edit my story and improve on my writing. 😰

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    My Animal System
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Posted

    ++WPC BRONZE WINNER++ I hope you enjoy the story......................................................................................................................................................

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    Hard to Choose
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Commented

    🤣😂😂

    "Sweet Mother of Vengeance," He said and his glasses fell down his head, his legs quivered as he walked.
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    Evolution of the Strongest Avatar
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Replied to Tommyshelby

    I don't know. The MC is kinda indecisive about females. No harem and romance will not interrupt the story

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    My Animal System
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Posted

    Oh my god, let me start by saying that the MC's backstory is legit amazing, I haven't read anything so thrilling and satisfying in a long time. Your writing style is superb and I think of ghost rider. Who doesn't love ghost rider? I'd love to dive into this. It's a page turner as well. ⚡

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    Angel of Wrath
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  • FavourEkele_1969
    FavourEkele_19691yr
    Posted

    MC is snarky, smart, obnoxious, humorous, bodacious, sometimes serious, determined. Slice of life. Romance...still working on my writing😁 Limited and not op. Being op early could lead to bad things.

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    My Animal System
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