As an author who's failed at writing romance, I have a deep respect of those who succeed in the genre. And You're Just One Kiss—a paranormal romance of vampires, werewolves, and hot female protagonists—is interesting enough that I quickly devoured those opening chapters like a kid with his candy bar. ;p The grammar's good, which is a huge plus on a platform like Webnovel. Punctuation's mostly spot on too. At least I hadn't seen any glaring issues apart from some sentence structure problems in the early chapters. Nothing that breaks immersion though. Pacing's good. Everything's moving fast enough that the reader will keep wanting to turn the page. Story kind of reminds me of Twilight—and not just because the wolf guy's name is Jacob—but there are similar tropes between the two that I can't help comparing them. That's not to say this isn't an original work. It is. And that becomes clearer the longer you read. Especially because vampires don't sparkle in this tale. LOL. Characters — Angeline's a strong protagonist. Nothing at all like Bella (Sorry again for the comparison). Jacob and Mallory (I love this vamp's name) are also solid characters with interesting quirks that make them stand apart from the generic handsome male protagonist saturating most romance titles. As for side characters, I'll get back to you once I've read more about them. ;P All in all, a good read, one worthy of standing out among Webnovel's legions of romance titles. This one is definitely worth your time so go read it!
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