Review Detail of LucienNg in You're Just One Kiss

Item: You're Just One Kiss
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

LucienNgLv12yrLucienNg

4.8/5 because I want you to continue and finish this and not give up halfway :). First of all, the plot was cool. I like how the story was progressing - not so fast, but not too slow either. The pace was just right. Your story is already good as it is, but please proofread some of the chapters when you have time. I saw a bit of tense inconsistency here and there, but I’m sure it won’t affect the readers’ experience too much, at least for me. Keep up the good work!

You're Just One Kiss

Jude_K_1656

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Jude_K_1656AuthorJude_K_1656

Thanks, Much for the encouragement words, LucienNg. I can't post/rate review on your. I will try later or tom morning. I did with others but two of you I can't post, it did not click when I hit post

2yr

Jude_K_1656AuthorJude_K_1656

Also thanks for some errors you've seen. I saw it too when I went to the read page... that's my shortcoming ever since, I don't do proofread, :) :) :) But will do a re-run of it... THANKS YOU SO MUCH FOR TELLING ME...

2yr

LucienNgLv1LucienNg

No worries :). All the best of luck to you 🍀

Jude_K_1656:Thanks, Much for the encouragement words, LucienNg. I can't post/rate review on your. I will try later or tom morning. I did with others but two of you I can't post, it did not click when I hit post

2yr

LucienNgLv1LucienNg

Thats the least I could do :).

Jude_K_1656:Also thanks for some errors you've seen. I saw it too when I went to the read page... that's my shortcoming ever since, I don't do proofread, :) :) :) But will do a re-run of it... THANKS YOU SO MUCH FOR TELLING ME...

2yr