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Thank you for pointing out! :).
Hello; thank you for reading. Dw as i’m still working on it :). These past few days have been a little hectic and I’m in the process of contract-signing. Thats why updates weren’t that frequent. Things will be back on track and as planned once everything settles. I’ll upload a new chapter by Sunday (1/5) (perhaps sooner).
Hey, this might sound sudden but thank you for the story (I've enjoyed it). I know writing isn't easy - it's such a big commitment, and balancing writing with other important things in your life is more than just 'challenging'. I feel bad that your story has to end this way, but again, it is what it is. I'm sure the decision was hard for you to make too. Thank you for being so helpful back then, and don't be too disappointed in yourself. You tried your best, and that's what matters. Farewell, then. All the best of luck with your future journey.
The idea itself seems fun, and the MC can be relatable at times. Well, since this type of genre is popular these days, the story can be repetitive, but I see the author has pulled it quite nicely. The only problem I have is with the writing quality. I understand it isnt easy to be g-free, but maybe give your chapters a re-run whenever you have time? Though people always improve with practice, so I believe this problem will be solved soon. Overall, good luck to your future journey.
They’ll tell us to go down for dinner instead of apologizing so what to expect?? 😂
Decently-high in our cultural standards should be, 9.0 GPA? 🤣🤣🤣
Ah, what I meant is that what Ly believed, not her herself. Maybe I should’ve put it in ”…” Anyways, it’s a matter of perspective. Thank you for giving your opinion, it was indeed an interesting exchange.
I changed it into “can be” 😊
Please do understand that I’m not underestimating our mental capability in any way. This is purely a work of fiction, and if you read the second paragraph below this one, I believe you’ll understand what I mean. But yes, that changes throughout our lives constantly, and everyone once had their weak moments.
I was standing in the MC’s perspective and situation she was in. Of course, everyone is different, but if you were suddenly thrown into such a situation without prior warning, and it happened for days, then I do not think everyone could have coped and think rationally. The MC was from a modern era, not the war period were you have no choice but to be strong. She was living an actual peaceful life. Humans are volatile, but they need time to adapt. In my opnion, even the strongest person was once weak.
People may consider this work to be slow-paced, but to me, it is going fine so far. The author is, undeniably, proficient at writing. Everything was so well-written, from the descriptive scenes to the emotions of each character. I can definitely say that their writing had been polished a lot with experience. The story itself is also interesting. Now, normally, I don’t enjoy reading fantasy with a mix of romance, but I’m loving so far. Relationships are no longer a burden. 5 stars, all the way. You deserve this. Please continue to do your best :).