GD_Cruz
An aspiring writer with a passion for middle grade and young adult fiction of the fantasy variety. Follow me on Twitter: @WhoisGDCruz
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To Liara's dismay, all I could do was nod—and this would be the opening act of how I got engaged at the young age of fifteen...- GD_Cruz14hReplied to Raenatta
Wait, why Oof? Wasn't this an interesting twist though?
"I swear on the Norns that my daughter, Liara Wilhemina Lockwood, is now betrothed to William Wisdom," Lorias swore. Then he turned his gaze on me and Liara. "May their love and respect for each other continue to grow along with them so that their union may last long after Yggdrasil's last winter." - GD_Cruz14hReplied to Bastion9999
Hahaha
The two snakes circling each other forming an S-like pattern with each snake biting the tail of the other was one of the most famous symbols in the realmsverse. Topped only by the valknut that only Divah and I knew how to wield correctly, and the hammer that symbolized the most famous god among the Aesir. Ironically, the twin snakes stood for the aforementioned thunder god's adopted brother, the 'Serpent One Cannot Trust,' the 'Unmentionable One,' the 'Father of Tricks,' the 'King of Lies,' the 'God of Mischief,' and a bunch of other titles I dared not mention. - GD_Cruz14hReplied to Raenatta
Yeah, a modern twist to old-timey lines is okay too. ;P
'I have become Death, destroyer of worlds…' Yeah, that line didn't work for me, the kid who escaped Death's clutches every time I died. So, with as much sarcasm as I could drip into two words, I said, "Hel no." - GD_Cruz1dReplied to Fuffy_Katons
Hehe sorry. I just want to make the story better when I can. ;P
EDITED: 20/07/23: Better dialogue, better opening, and fixed grammar issues during the fight scene. - GD_Cruz1dReplied to Fuffy_Katons
I try. ;P
Note: Edited the previous chapter 21/07/23. Fixed the fight between Saga and the ice mage. Also edited the dialogue before the fight. - GD_Cruz2dReplied to Fuffy_Katons
explained further in the next paragraph. 😉 It's also a place where ki accumulates in Murim novels.
Understanding that 'pulse' I felt in the base of my chest did make it easier to find a similar pulsing in a spot that Divah called my perineum. - GD_Cruz3dReplied to Fuffy_Katons
Oh yeah, but it's a fantasy so... 😆 doable!
"Dual-wielding spears…" I raised an eyebrow at her back. "Groovy." - GD_Cruz3dReplied to Raenatta
Me too. 😆
I glanced down at my half-naked body, noticing how my abs seemed more defined, and how the rest of me looked more fit. However, did that mean the impossible was possible as well? Could I truly have gotten… No, I refused to say the T-word and get my hopes up. At least not until I've checked myself in the mirror. - GD_Cruz4dReplied to Raenatta
Yes, editing now. missed these.
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Ah, consider this edited. will get to it in a bit.
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Actually, he doesn't. He and Divah discuss it at length how he didn't seem interested to hunt his killers as much as she was. He just wasn't sure, but yeah, he definitely hates them. Again, I go back to him being passive about it unless they're right in his face like Lorias was.
Ch 129 The Truth Shall Set Us Free, Part 2 - GD_Cruz5dReplied to Tunic01
Would you be able to outright say the facts about someone to their kid? I don't know a lot of people who could. Add that to the fact that he wants to make up with her and Will would definitely push the truth to some other point in time instead of burdting the bubble right now. It's only human to postpone the troublesome things, right? haha
"Honestly, I can neither confirm nor deny it." I wrapped the blanket around Liara's shoulder. "The memories of an eleven-year-old kid aren't that reliable… but…" - GD_Cruz5dReplied to Raenatta
Ah yes, Wisdom. Not intelligence. haha Still, pretty high for a teenager.
[INTELLIGENCE: 61] [WISDOM: 17] [WILLPOWER: 20] - GD_Cruz5dReplied to
It's pretty high for an apprentice though.
[INTELLIGENCE: 61] [WISDOM: 17] [WILLPOWER: 20] - GD_Cruz5dReplied to Raenatta"Why does it keep fighting things that are bigger than it…"
- GD_Cruz5dReplied to Raenatta
Ah!!! That would be dope!
I chose the tranq arrow first because I knew it would be slower than a regular arrow's flight across the expanse of space between me and my target. However, as Grendel had turned to face me just as quickly, I thought my second arrow would fail to hit its mark on account of the monster's parasitic cloak now covering most of its chest with its weird shadows. But, by a stroke of luck, Reddington chose this moment to breathe ghostly blue flames at Grendel's blindside. 'Helfire' exploded on the monster's left side, causing the shadows on that side to retreat from the flames at just the right moment when my arrow pierced the chink between the scales of Grendel's chest. - GD_Cruz5dReplied to Raenatta
XD
It was the first smile I'd gotten today that wasn't Dess', but that wasn't what made me frown suddenly. I had a strange feeling that I'd seen that smile before. I just wasn't sure where. - GD_Cruz5dReplied to Raenatta
It'll prove useful for this reckless kid
[[SPELL: Song of Radiance (Degraded)] [Type: Divine] [Tier: 2] [Range: 5 Feet] [Mana Cost: 5 mana per second up to 30 seconds] When activated, you release a healing aura that calms the mind, mends the body, and soothes the spirit.] - GD_Cruz5dReplied to Raenatta
You might be right. I remember the staircase heading down to another floor. I' edit once I check.
After all, didn't I encounter that monstrous bastard on the grotto's second floor?