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Wait, why Oof? Wasn't this an interesting twist though?
Yeah, a modern twist to old-timey lines is okay too. ;P
Hehe sorry. I just want to make the story better when I can. ;P
I try. ;P
explained further in the next paragraph. 😉 It's also a place where ki accumulates in Murim novels.
Oh yeah, but it's a fantasy so... 😆 doable!
Me too. 😆
Yes, editing now. missed these.
Ah, consider this edited. will get to it in a bit.
Actually, he doesn't. He and Divah discuss it at length how he didn't seem interested to hunt his killers as much as she was. He just wasn't sure, but yeah, he definitely hates them. Again, I go back to him being passive about it unless they're right in his face like Lorias was.
Would you be able to outright say the facts about someone to their kid? I don't know a lot of people who could. Add that to the fact that he wants to make up with her and Will would definitely push the truth to some other point in time instead of burdting the bubble right now. It's only human to postpone the troublesome things, right? haha
Ah yes, Wisdom. Not intelligence. haha Still, pretty high for a teenager.
It's pretty high for an apprentice though.
Ah!!! That would be dope!
It'll prove useful for this reckless kid
You might be right. I remember the staircase heading down to another floor. I' edit once I check.