Reviews of Unflag:Deity's Game?

I'll be straight to the point. Your plot is amazing and your work has a lot pf potential. It's just for me, you look lazy. Instead of using *poof* and the likes, explaining the details will be much more appreciated. Grammatical errors are everywhere which can be easily removed with the proper proofreading. We all started from scratch, so it's not weird to have those mistakes. When I wrote my first novel 'Infinite Gameplay' I too have many mistakes. Kudos to you and I hope you improve as time goes by

This story is lit! With few edits and finishing touches, this will become great in the future! Readers should read this if you are a new one! Kudos and congrats!......from review swap thread.

ehm... I have seen quite an amount of people do this. Hello! Shameless review by the Author how you guys enjoying this so far. I think I did that right did I? Anyways "REAL TALK" so I was going to upload a chapter each day but I can not physically nor mentally do that. I am going to try 3-8 chapters a week. Also wouldn not mind if I had some paragraph comments for what could be done better. If it is not too much to ask anyways thanks.

Hmm, well I can't say I understand everything that is going on, but your last two chapters definitely caught my intention. I'm eager to make sense of your beginning. It seems like the protagonist is caught in some kind of reincarnation time loop. Interesting concept, and I love the sense of mystery and uncertainty the reader feels as they progress. I look forward to reading this as a completed work so i can make full sense of the plot. Keep up the good work, and hats off for your ambitious efforts in trying something new.

Honestly your story is very different than others- its got potential and i can tell that made it with enthusiasm becuz this story is great. I mean by just reading that damn interesting plot, any reader would want to read your book! So awesome work- I will continue reading it.

I feel like you would benefit from proof reading. Also maybe toning down the swearing a tiny bit lol. Although we all swear I feel like if its not relevant to the story then maybe trim it out. Save it for special occasions, like when some really messed up stuff happens! Then your readers will know its serious!! I did think however the use of kind of little codes throughout the story was pretty cool. Overall I'd say it was ok, some interesting ideas in there, the story was interesting in itself. I'd like to know where it ends up. Keep at it!

It's a good story line , nice plot . I like your synopsis . There are a bit of grammatical errors and no proper flow but it's ok . It's just the start . All the best !!![img=recommend]

Haha, the book is really nice but the author needs to put in more work to pop out more chapters. The story idea is nice and would be even better if the author adds more chapters and spice, keep it up it's a very good work.

Great start, author! I was drawn inmediately by the synopsis and eventhough it is still a work in progress and you have a lot of room for improvement and exploring, I think you have a great plot and motivation. I hope you continue updating soon, it seems that the ML has a great personality, very funny. I would like to read more. 😊

Only 3 chapters but this is good. The writing is great though it can be confusing at time. Highly recommend for anyone who loves adventure😄

LETS BREAK THIS DOWN TO PLUSSES AND MINUSES +great plot and definitive scope for development +intriguing characters +great prologue and material +mc's pov is fresh and its quite different - grammatical errors - lack of effort into formatting -its just a new book! so i'd love to read further to do justice to this and leave a rating ^-^ keep me notified when u post 10 chaps at least, dm me on insta @gaureeey or email me on gaureeey1155@gmail.com and i will help u out to the best of my ability !

I felt as I am reading a system novel. The start was good but only 2 chaps...but your writing style is great and confusing at the same time. Hope you would continue the work...But story is a little confusing .try to make it a little simple..may be it is just me..btw best of luck

This dope, you can improved more deep and more awesome. I hope you'll give me more surprise and make some outstanding story. Wish you luck in the near future.

This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and skills accompanied with hard work, this will fare well in the future! A little bit of finishing touches will do the trick! Congrats and Kudos! from Review swap......

First, since this has still has few chapters I couldn't still fully grasp the story. But the synopsis for this one is quiet interesting. The characters are good and could be fleshen up more. Overall, I will look forward for the development of this story, since isekais are also one of my lifetime favorites. Keep it up author! I'll definitely keep this in my collections and look forward for more updates.

I won't give this anything less than three stars cause of how motivated you are to learn and better your writing. I still think it could use a little work though, but the story concept is nice. what did bother me was the constant use of onomatopoeic words (*poof*, *thud*) Like when he took out the map, you could've described it in a better way? But the synopsis immediately drew me in and it's still to early to say much, but i like this so far.