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I'll be straight to the point. Your plot is amazing and your work has a lot pf potential. It's just for me, you look lazy. Instead of using *poof* and the likes, explaining the details will be much more appreciated. Grammatical errors are everywhere which can be easily removed with the proper proofreading. We all started from scratch, so it's not weird to have those mistakes. When I wrote my first novel 'Infinite Gameplay' I too have many mistakes. Kudos to you and I hope you improve as time goes by
Unflag:Deity's Game?
Alom7th
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I mean your not wrong I wasn't planning on making this a serious thing unless it seemed somewhat good. At the moment I have too many things on my hand, but I wanted to do writing as a hobby. I couldn't really be doing too much editing or proofreading, but the days aren't that hard I can't. If I had to say I mentally tired so for the first two chapters I didn't do anything besides some sleazy sound effects/onomatopoeia. Next chapters I am going to put some more effort into it. Grammatical errors were a lack of proofread and effort, I know where I'm going with the idea, so upcoming chapters will be better I promise anyway thank you.
Alom7th:I mean your not wrong I wasn't planning on making this a serious thing unless it seemed somewhat good. At the moment I have too many things on my hand, but I wanted to do writing as a hobby. I couldn't really be doing too much editing or proofreading, but the days aren't that hard I can't. If I had to say I mentally tired so for the first two chapters I didn't do anything besides some sleazy sound effects/onomatopoeia. Next chapters I am going to put some more effort into it. Grammatical errors were a lack of proofread and effort, I know where I'm going with the idea, so upcoming chapters will be better I promise anyway thank you.
heh yeah, I just really wrote this on the fly even the story idea I had only gotten the day I started writing. My first idea was completely different and my second the same.(I'm going to saves those for later)
MikruZero:That's great. Looking forward to it!