Review Detail of Alom7th in Unflag:Deity's Game?

ehm... I have seen quite an amount of people do this. Hello! Shameless review by the Author how you guys enjoying this so far. I think I did that right did I? Anyways "REAL TALK" so I was going to upload a chapter each day but I can not physically nor mentally do that. I am going to try 3-8 chapters a week. Also wouldn not mind if I had some paragraph comments for what could be done better. If it is not too much to ask anyways thanks.