Hmm, well I can't say I understand everything that is going on, but your last two chapters definitely caught my intention. I'm eager to make sense of your beginning. It seems like the protagonist is caught in some kind of reincarnation time loop. Interesting concept, and I love the sense of mystery and uncertainty the reader feels as they progress. I look forward to reading this as a completed work so i can make full sense of the plot. Keep up the good work, and hats off for your ambitious efforts in trying something new.
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