Travelling My Favorite Worlds!

Now I was planning on writing a new review much later but someone upset me today by putting tags of my story that ARE NOT WHAT MY STORY IS ABOUT. I want to put that to rest now, so I wish for everyone that reads this or knows my story to like this review so potential readers can see this! The reason people are upset is because early on I wanted to have an MC that would show growth! I made him like a kid in a candy shop with his new world, trusting and honest, and most certainly not a pervert. There was a single incident where he saw Tsunade, but he was a teenager and it was awkward for him! As for what happens to him without spoiling anything, he learns better! I mean it's not even 40 chapters into the story, and these people were getting upset and saying I am a trash author at less than 10 chapters because of me going and having the MC act overwhelmed by being in a fantasy world he watched a lot! End rant, but man I was really upset about this, and at the time of this writing I am still upset by this and everytime I look back on it I will probably have a sour taste in my mouth because I can't do anything (As far as I know) about the tags this one person put for my story. I feel so defeated as an author that I don't know what to do.

This is an extra F U I just read the review of yours which you got angry at true fucking tags. If you wanted to show an MC maturing then you just need to change the beginning to make the MC mentally handicapped. You showed zero maturity of an ***** which the mx was you should've picked a kid instead dumbass. Those thinking this is one of the best fanfics they've ever read. I pity them. and their lack of intellect... Yes I'm dissing alot of people but **** you!

The MC is genuinely an idiot, and the worlds he ends up in are manipulated in such a way as to allow his rampant stupidity to go unpunished. Each "world" that the MC visits are a poor caricature of the reality painted for us by the original authors of the works used. The characters contained have had their motivations and depth torn from them, leaving a husk, less of a character in a play, and more of a loose collection of character traits you slapped a name on. I just can't suspend my disbelief that you can go into a ninja village, spout out world breaking secrets, expose knowledge of highly confidential information, and get a pat on the head before going out drinking with your new ninja buddies who have known you for less than a day, met you in highly suspect circumstances, and still trust you for some bizarre reason. At the very bare minimum any remotely sane leader would have held you in confinement before having your brain probed the instant you mentioned the Nine Tails was in the village.

I feel that since I have now put out my 10th chapter I should go and put my own review. Naturally I am a slightly shameless author and go for the 5 stars. I'm kidding about that. I feel it earns 5 stars because I have a variety of reasons honestly. Writing quality: For this I feel that since I have some experience writing stories I have developed some semblance of a style that I typically like to write, I also am fairly decent at my use of grammar. Yes I am a native English speaker. Stability of Updates: Now honestly, out of all of these this is the only one that I can't say I 100% believe myself on. Since I write this while bored on the bus or in class I usually end up writing a good bit and have had once chapter minimum out a day, sometimes 2. I consider that stable though so unless something happens I think 1 chapter a day is good. Story Development: Well honestly since this is fan fiction I am imparting my own ideas of what would be cool into the world, I won't spoil anything but I've already changed a major plot point. So I think that my that this garners a 5 star. Character Design: I want to keep the characters close to their source material but I want to make them better, give them more fitting ends, and better lives. Destroy those who deserve it, kill those that don't kind of thing. Most of all though I want to eventually include (Not often) some OC's I made that will have some importance and hopefully people will start liking. Also this is Harem, but it won't be obnoxious and the main character will have some guy friends unlike most Harem stories I have read World Background: Honestly, basing it off of going to different worlds shouldn't get a 5 if you do it the traditional way, but I don't plan on doing it the traditional way. Some people will stick to one anime, or bounce between animes. I have read some stories where they do other things but I want to be really out there and make my mark so that my story will do it's own thing. Sure it starts off stereotypical but it will pick up steam fast. Tl;Dr I am biased but I have reasons I laid out above for voting the way I did.

Nope. Mc tells everything to tsunade. Tsunade can't detect lies when he doesn't even have chakra. The mc acts like a reatrd from one of that Japanese harem novel. Don't know if you are trying to improve or not but I don't really see the point in reading your story. The brain-dead mc's and novels make me frustrated. The only advice is to stop reading brain dead novels and rather read some good ones so you can get an idea on how to develop characters.

Just want to rate.. I dont have anyting to say 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

I'll just go ahead and give it five stars. And then this sentence was constructed in order to reach the one hundred and fourty character minimum that is complete and utter bull with everyone knowing it.

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It is a waste of time to read this novel. One of the worst novels I've read or maybe it's the worst?....................................................................

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This is to flip a middle finger at gman who spams only because he is a harem fanatic and fûck stupid mcs.

Indeed wish fulfilment yet again. Writing quality - 3 Speed reader and i don't give a ****. Stability of Updates - 4 When you don't need to think about plot carefully as well as character interactions it is easy to go ham. Story Development - 2 Trash. Flame me if you want and i read most of the story. But it is trash IMO. Several reasons. Interactions are one sided. No character descriptions over things like clothes and if ever it is very rarely done IE date with tsunade. another is the 7 year gap. MC literally waster 7 years doing nothing. Not physical training or anything. It's like he was planning to become a disciple of the hokage. I mean he could exercise and let the clones increase chakra reserves. regeneration doesn't seem to deal with fatigue so let the condensation of chakra a breather period for him. Character Design - 1 Stupid as **** ***** MC. who dates a girl thats cheated on him for 50 times in the last year? and only now does he breaks out of it. I mean i can see why he didn't open the packs instantly cause he's a dumbass. No character descriptions were given if anything Danzo was the most you've done. Development rushed and forced. Orochimaru did sick fucking experiments did you expect him to change within just one talking? Tsunade fairly good but after that one quest she doesn't really see much development. Sarutobi was just there acting as a non important character. Oh yeah did i mention how much of a fucking inept retarded handicapped ***** the mc is? fucking chuuni mofo got captured due to stupidity. I know each year our generation gets more and more retarded but really?... World background - 1 Zero. 0 None Void doesn't exist. Trash. Harsh review time over. Yeah wish fulfilment and all but did you have to make the MC so fucking retarded and bitchy? happy go lucky mofo using his regeneration as a crutch didn't even give a reason for the fucking BS chakra ammounts. given reason too fucking bs. just cause he's from another universe he can access two sage modes? i know system is the actual reason but i really fuxking hate dumbass happy go lucky Mc's

Just stupid tried to get into the story but too messy and hard to follow 😫.

novel is great 5 stars .........................................................................................................................................................................

Please do not drop this fan-fic..... I beg you! DO NOT DROP THIS FAN FIC!! I repeat DO NOT EVER FCKING DROP THIS FCKING BLOODY NOVEL!!! . . . . . ...... .. . . . . . .... ... . . . Thanks

Good job doing the story!!!!Now,if only it had a stable release...... Love your work by the way,author sama... ..............................................😂😂😂😂❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😂😂😂😂😂😍😍😍😍😍

saludos; gracias por tan divertida historia me parece de lo mejor muy divertida sobre todo da gusto ver que no solo el prota esta muy roto si no que mantiene los pies en la cabeza claro despues de la tortura pero eso le da un toque extra de buen gusto por seguir una trama mas diversa gracias nuevamente y siguiere la historia el tiempo que pueda gracias.

Good story and good character development ZgzkZsjkgzktgkgkgcgjxhjzkxkggksgkisisisgzgzkzgmzgmzmxkktsksiyyskyzgzkktstissfgFdhsksitgssgdysgjz.msgjtksfagzksgzzggggzgzgvkgzgkzhskysgskgsgsjgsizosgdsgksstksksieusitsidgjiixhxj

novel is great 5 stars .........................................................................................................................................................................

novel is great 5 stars .........................................................................................................................................................................