Reviews of The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory
The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory
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It's Vain - trust me it's good π As someone that read this initially on SH (and binged it in the span of a day), I can say this is one of the most well-written and engaging pieces of fiction I've personally experienced. And it's exactly the type of story I know Webnovel readers enjoy. MC is smart and finds every opportunity to abuse the system to his advantage, he's creative with how he uses his skills, and he's incredibly analytic. ...if that doesn't convince you, then the rampant attraction of various women willπ
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I can't believe something like this has this many views, the longer I read the ff the more angry I got (WHY) because you basically changed the whole personality of the Mc(which was fine btw) but made the plot THE EXACT SAME AS THE ORIGINAL nothing has changed except some of his powers(he's more op) and even with more power you're still making him follow the same plot as the original. Look i'm not asking for you to change the entire plot but at least have something be different, this is basically COPY-PASTE!
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here are my thought on up to chapter 40: 1. nothing changed from the original book, the plots are the same and author tries too hard to stay along the original plot that it's annoying. 2. This MC is too kind and generous to some and mean to others, there is no fixed personality for him. but even if that's not the case, his over generosity is just like seol. Almost dying for his loved ones over and over again. I read fanfics so that I get to see differences between the original and fanfics, not to see the same thing over again. 3. the only reason I'm sticking with it is because the writing quality is great in this one and you can't find fanfics with good writing quality that often. 4. MC's personality is annoying to me.
my review is low because it's true the mc is op because of og mc skill and additional skill he got but the story development really low the mc said he KNOW the story but like some comments here he act sometimes not like he know he's gf come from the other side but he didn't know the story it's suck I mean ok you change the mc personality body before he go to paradise but why the story development like that I only reach chapter 20 but it's enough for mo to tell that the author only changed little things and copyright everything from original novelπππ‘
I am a little disappointed with this fanfic. Since everyone was praising it, I thought it would be great. At first, it was going well, but when he entered the tutorial event he was thinking of not standing out because he was getting observed. The action alone destroyed my hope in this fanfic. Also, so far the only change I have seen is improving himself and his family relationship. I would read further to see if fanfic changes.
I have no idea why this has such a high rating. Would NOT recommend reading. Even though the MC is so much more powerful than the original he still follows canon, if he was doing it deliberately so he can take advantage of having foreknowledge, I would understand, but he's not, he somehow ALWAYS forgets the plot just when something of importance is about to happen, then complains because he wasn't fast enough, MULTIPLE TIMES.
