Review Detail of Hahadavis in The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory

Item: The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory
Rating: 1

Review detail

HahadavisLv52yrHahadavis

I can't believe something like this has this many views, the longer I read the ff the more angry I got (WHY) because you basically changed the whole personality of the Mc(which was fine btw) but made the plot THE EXACT SAME AS THE ORIGINAL nothing has changed except some of his powers(he's more op) and even with more power you're still making him follow the same plot as the original. Look i'm not asking for you to change the entire plot but at least have something be different, this is basically COPY-PASTE!

The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory

HappyVainGlory

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HappyVainGloryAuthorHappyVainGlory

2yr

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DevilNutTriggerLv14DevilNutTrigger

I dont know if I can take your review seriously considering your pfp is a troll face…

2yr

Percy_PerchLv2Percy_Perch

I have no idea what to believe but the troll face is making me not believe u

2yr

HiatusAuthorEuclidLv4HiatusAuthorEuclid

I just can't take you seriously man, I saw in your profile that you continued reading after you gave a 1 star.

2yr

MirukuTakuLv4MirukuTaku

this dude probably just goes around trolling other ffs lol

2yr

Sleeping_LeviathanLv3Sleeping_Leviathan

Did... Did you just complain about the MC’s character changing in a self insert fic?

2yr

ONEPUNCHLv4ONEPUNCH

He is complaining about the plot. He's fine with the change in personality (and actually supports it)

Sleeping_Leviathan:Did... Did you just complain about the MC’s character changing in a self insert fic?

2yr

IAmNumber5Lv4IAmNumber5

Well in his case he didn't say that he was dropping

HiatusAuthorEuclid:I just can't take you seriously man, I saw in your profile that you continued reading after you gave a 1 star.

2yr

FuehrerLv3Fuehrer

I kind of agree with your opinion... but giving one star is too excessive.... Mc's personality in my opinion is very irregular like sometimes he wants to save people and sometimes he is selfish... also I think the story is a bit like the original novel ... sigh

2yr

Amatsuka_YukinoLv13Amatsuka_Yukino

Some people find it unsettling not having things go out of their control which is why I think he stick close to the plot?

2yr

HappyVainGloryAuthorHappyVainGlory

Huh. Seems like people don't read the auxillary author's notes. Good to know.

Amatsuka_Yukino:Some people find it unsettling not having things go out of their control which is why I think he stick close to the plot?

2yr

Afonso_AaronLv5Afonso_Aaron

Do you have a schedule for the update author-san ?

HappyVainGlory:Huh. Seems like people don't read the auxillary author's notes. Good to know.

2yr

HappyVainGloryAuthorHappyVainGlory

I did, but law school workload was more than expected. Aiming for weekly on Friday/Saturday right now and hopefully biweekly when I get things sorted

Afonso_Aaron:Do you have a schedule for the update author-san ?

2yr

Amatsuka_YukinoLv13Amatsuka_Yukino

Was just reading the reviews before reading so.. 😅

HappyVainGlory:Huh. Seems like people don't read the auxillary author's notes. Good to know.

2yr

HappyVainGloryAuthorHappyVainGlory

Oh, nono. Didn't mean to address you in specific. I just thought that they automatically pop up first so it would have been explained. I guess they don't thought? 🤔

Amatsuka_Yukino:Was just reading the reviews before reading so.. 😅

2yr

Shnh_Kusuma_3576Lv2Shnh_Kusuma_3576

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2yr

Cursed_sinLv12Cursed_sin

It’s good He is following the plot a bit Po mcuh for now but it’sworth reading

DevilNutTrigger:I dont know if I can take your review seriously considering your pfp is a troll face…
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2yr

UnderstandLv12Understand

This is supposed to be a self insert fan fiction tho... so I don't get your argument...

2yr

Chaotic_WinterLv12Chaotic_Winter

are the harem members same as in the novel?

HappyVainGlory:Huh. Seems like people don't read the auxillary author's notes. Good to know.

1yr

sholo_boloLv3sholo_bolo

I can attest that what he's saying is true. the entire plot stays the same and sometimes the author uses such forced plots to make that happen that it's annoying to read on at certain parts. the MC is also overly generous just like seol so I don't really see the point of this book, aren't fanfics supposed to be different that the original?

DevilNutTrigger:I dont know if I can take your review seriously considering your pfp is a troll face…
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1yr