You might as well have him adopted by the Todorokis, seeing as he's so invested in other people's family affairs.

You've piqued my interest. Who is it?

I've been meaning to ask this for some time now, but why are the characters in your fanfics so hórny? This is a genuine question out of curiosity, not to offend you or anything. It just feels weird reading the hórny dialogues the characters themselves usually don't say. Anyway, I rate this 5 stars but I give 1 star to break the review bot spam. Thank you for the free entertainment.

Kind of contradictive going by him being raised by the hero that taught All Might, not showing hints of psychopathy in the earlier chapters and his childhood, and being capable of teasing and interactions with other characters, I don't see why the Main Character who is aspiring as a hero, training to he a hero, kill someone just because he wants to impress a deranged killer. Also, wasn't he a victim of bullying, that's why he did a school of shooting? Why TF would he murder a girl when that girl is being killed by a blood sucking killer who is worse than a bully? This is a completely useless chapter that basically trashes the present lighthearted tone and the Main Character's development. As things go I don't think I will like the development of the MC so I will leave. I hope you can be consistent and manage the tone shift in your future chapters.

Woman died before I could even blink. What was even the point in killing her? Where you hoping for a reaction or just wanted the MC to be an edgy vigilante?

Pointless drama. He could've just said Fate wanted to teach him because of his potential.

This is getting kinda boring. Shouldn't you finish the Young Justice Arc, or maybe his System Upgrades before doing side quests like these? It feels like filler.

I've noticed this before but why are your dialogues so weird? They give too much information as if the author(you) is controlling them to describe something(MC'S Handsome look, aura, yadayada). I suggest you read the dialogues again and because I don't see characters talking like that unless their in a play. Plus its

You've kinda ruined the first arc tbh. If you didn't give him so many perks, the level of immersion in Hunger Games could've been felt, but since he's basically Captain America with all buffs and technical knowledge most readers don't know of, the immersion was ruined and the first world basically became his playground without any tension. You should've given him the abilities after winning, maybe even some romance with Glimmer that would ultimately end in her death plus some drama or something, but no, you pushed in the cliche System at the start. Wasted potential, you have good writing but your planning is wack. Don't assume readers know what you are talking about, explain the powers to them slowly not info dumps with 10% actual plot. It's rare to have a Hunger Games Ff nowaday. Anyway, the novel isn't for me, but I wish you luck in your future works. You have a unique immersive writing but you can't capture realism in it's essence. I hope you continue to improve.

Bruh, don't tell me this is like those Japanese mangas "I became a God, but I want to live an ordinary life" bs. Why does he even want to work for them? ??

"Working for you?" Are you sure he read that book properly???

Dialogues feels like CN MTL

One Piece Fanboy gets a choice to pick between DC and One Piece. Guess what? He chose DC. 😂 😂 😂 Then he wakes up as Vandal Savage's brother (Doesn't have any relevance to the story) Takes on Roger's persona and wants to become a Pirate King in the age of Mythos. it's stupid and a waste of time, nothing changes with the plot. MC literally is a fuccing thug, just doing whatever the fuc he wants in the name of freedom. Author writes at the top of his head so the story progression is shlt. He introduced Boa Hancock as Aphrodite's sister then ask to be married in their first meeting. What was even the point of reincarnating in DC with Olympian Gods if you're not going to change anything and crossover it with One Piece? You should've written a One Piece fic to begin with.

Steal a replica of the Titanic and make it fly while dumping pixie dust(coke) on people's heads to make them 'fly' as well.

Ok. Btw this is filler

hm, more different than I thought. I thought he would be a merciless guy who does what he wants at the moment, but he is the analytical type I guess.

Bruh why is the supposed emotionless MC teasing people if he doesn't give a fúcc. He could've just beaten them up psychopath style without talking.

I thought it was good because of the touching prologue at the start, but then the MC gets killed by his sister cliched style followed by him meeting Superman God. So I read the rest and recognized a pattern. You can check the author's works, he has good updating stability but his stories lack substance, full of plot holes, changing personality of the MC, cliche scenarios, etc. I thought he would improve from his previous works but it's all the same. It's a good wishfullfilment but that's it overall. The MC basically bros with Superman God but is actually working for him, anyways it's a wishfullfilment in a predictable storyline that the author slightly altered by adding extra tidbits like turning the OG main character a girl. (Bell from Danmachi to Bella) It follows an overpowered MC that can hunt at 3 years old, talk perfectly and none of the world's inhabitants are the wiser to point it out. Not my cup of tea, but good for wasting time if you turn off your brains.

It was a very touching start, but the sister causing the MC to die was hilarious. Not only is it used as a plot device in a lot of movies, it is also one of the most popular cliche deaths in romance. If the story is filled with that kind of cliche, I don't think this will be good.

Historic moment right here. Or maybe it wasn't called Titanic in this earth?