Review Detail of sholo_bolo in The Second Coming of Gluttony, the First of Vainglory

here are my thought on up to chapter 40: 1. nothing changed from the original book, the plots are the same and author tries too hard to stay along the original plot that it's annoying. 2. This MC is too kind and generous to some and mean to others, there is no fixed personality for him. but even if that's not the case, his over generosity is just like seol. Almost dying for his loved ones over and over again. I read fanfics so that I get to see differences between the original and fanfics, not to see the same thing over again. 3. the only reason I'm sticking with it is because the writing quality is great in this one and you can't find fanfics with good writing quality that often. 4. MC's personality is annoying to me.