NyxReveuse
I was at first impressed by the relationship between a father and a daughter. Proceeding, the fairytale like made me smile and I grew something for the book. However with a satisfying description it was a little overdone but it didn't affect the book in any way. With more chapters I have nothing to worry about
Descriptions are top-notch making the readers immersed into the story while still allowing the readers imagination to be creative. Story development is good and unique, i enjoyed reading it and the for the main chracter, this is my first novel with a female main character , i enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work and good luck. [img=recommend]
Well, I will be frank. I had an overall positive experience on this novel. While occasionally the dialogue was tucked inside a text wall, other than that it flowed and I could follow who was talking at any given time. Considering there is a lot if dialogue that is a plus that you manage to achieve. The initial synopsis page was a nice touch. I wish I had thought of it, but it threw me off at first since I didn't expect it. A rookie mistake on my part, bit I really did draw me in. You can consider me a fan, and you will receive another review from me once I reach chapter 50.