Dad is just tryna make him understand that her back gonna get blown out and he has to live with that. Harsh but true.

Oh my days, I have all my respect towards the great writing quality. I am not usually interested in this type of genre but I'm hooked to yours. Gonna spend my free time reading this beauty.

Honestly the story is quite good in it's own way, but I do recommend that the way you structure dialogue should be consistent cause you kept switching from [ ] to ' ' which was... questionable. But overall it's a good read. I just hope that it doesn't take the generic isekai route.

Yup I knew it, this is an isekai. Gonna see how it goes. Better not be generic.

Thank you for the review and don't worry there will be more chapters on their way. If you don't mind please share in case there might be people who could like this.

With great hope and "focus" I can somewhat see this becoming a really great story in the future, so I hope that the update stability will not be a great issue.

Sorry for late reply, but sure.

Honestly this is a good read. The start was really funny for me but it set up the story pretty well so I got kinda hooked. Keep up the good work. And by the way the way you write is really good, dialogue is separated properly.

You definitely meant head right? But she got what was coming to her

Serves her right for thinking there was plot armor

Sometimes in life you have to understand that there is no way out and accept that. What does she think will happen.

Of course it did what else did she think would happen

Bruh us on Earth were just chilling with our own problems but ok.

Hope to see that this story goes far. If it gets a manhwa adaptation then that would be awesome. Problems in update stabability but still a great read.

I won't lie to you this is some gourmet book. As soon as I read the title I thought "This better not make me sad." which I'm expecting but sweet damn this is a nice book.

This is a great read to be honest. Only issue is the writing format of the dialogue which I believe can be improved, but overall great book.

The grammar needs some help and at first I thought that it was going to be an SAO copy but it is actually pretty good. Try reading other novels to improve on grammar.

As soon as I read the synopsis I could feel that it is gonna be a great read, so I dived right in. The writing is so good that even I'm learning from this. Great book.

I'm pretty weak when it comes to horror even in books, but your kept me going. Grammar could use some work, but overall it is a good read. Great work.