There will be another 5 today

Thank you for letting me know. Its original. Iam using an urban Chinese novel as a reference to help me set up the world back ground. I will fix it. Thank you for letting me know do tell me if i leave some mistakes here and there. The novel i used as reference is: centennial su family in hong Kong. its a good novel if you can tolerate nationalisms.

i am gonna change it a bit i don't know if it will be better like this.

What can I say man? I have read so many Chinese novels that I am getting influenced at this point. I have probably read more than a thousand novels in the past year, and this is not an exaggeration; I believe I have read way more than that.

Well, that's true. That time was full of gangs and wars, so people tend to prefer boxing matches to be more violent. As a matter of fact, a lot of boxing champions in 1940 were actually gang leaders. You win them in a boxing match, and they shoot you in a street fight.

hhhhhh i don't know bro army doctors where never know for being good to be honest even now in 2024 army doctors sucks

It was indeed in hiatus, and i just resumed updating. hopefully you will like it. I have been accumulating chapters since Jan there will be a lot of Chapters this days.

It is original, but the story is sadly going to be canceled, and I will write something else. After all, this is a novel from two years ago; I barely even remember what I had in mind. (Between you and me, it is nearly impossible to get a contract for a novel that is not original now days after AI detector is no joke, so for most of the contracted novels after 2019, I do say 99% more or less are original.) brother WebNovel is a giant in the novel industry; you can't just fool them with a copy of the of the past. But like I said, I kind of want to write something else now. I hope to have time for it, and hope you will be interested in it as much as you were in this one.

I am changing some stuff here and there. New year, new idea. You guys shouldn't really bother reading the first chapters anyway; it's the same novel, same concept, just small modifications. I haven't removed the novel yet since I am using the previous one to write this one, so I can be faster than starting over from nothing. Happy to hear from you guys. I hope you stay well.

hhhh neither did i, its like the gym workout for 2 month and come back next year hhhh.

hhhhhhhhhhh. that was nice of you to ask about my health, but no i survived :). I am releasing a new novel soon i have improved a lot recently i just been writhing in amazon i am now coming back to web novel.

The storyline is unique, i enjoyed reading it The character design of our MC surfaces through his actions and body language. It's better than most books out thier. I was immersed into the story from just few chapters i reccomned this. Well done auhtore keep up the good work.

while i'm not sure my idea reached its still the classic evil bad assassin value family love or something

I tried to portray an evil character who is ruthless to his enemies and even himself but also someone who still has a bit human emotions such as appreciating beautiful thins and wealth si while i tried to do that i also wanted him to till value the kindness he recived from people who are sturggling in life even harder than him

Would you believe it if i tell you my attention was to write white not wight. xD thank you for pointing that out. [img=recommend]

I see, well an orange hair dose look retarded indeed i misunderstood him my bad thank you for clarifying. English isn't my strongest point and couple that with my rashness well tragedy is bound to accrue here or there i guess. [img=recommend]

True, also i don't know how this work exactly so i didn't add it in the novel (not many information's available to me) but once you enter the radar of the KGB you some how end up under the radar of the CIA by default xD.

Thank you for giving this novel a try. I happy to see you enjoy reading it.

Alright to be honest what i did was a mistake when we aren't thinking straight we end up doing wrong things. so i will apologies for that i hope your novel successed i have wrote a review for the few first chapters i read, although i think you may need to rework some chapters over all its passable. I wont go into details on how to make your first novel succeed here but i do advice you to check that out or check what currently the new novels are doing to attract viewers because honestly your novel isn't bad at all, and yeah that's it. good luck

I read till Chapter 10 and this is a review for the first 10 chapters. This actually good first the story line is unique although a bit fast paced for my taste second the characters design surfaces through their actions and body language I am pretty impressed by this although this should come at later stage of the novel and you should focus more the MC in the first chapters. But all in all this is really good i enjoyed reading it. And finally this is out of topic and not part of the review this genuinely my advice, you have a great novel i have some guesses why its not doing great and most importantly i think you started slow. Just so you know if you manage to release more than 15 k words in your novel for first month you will enter the top starlet novels on the main page for 5 days, and that's where you get your first batch of readers, people who will like your novel will end up reading it and sharing it with their friends of course stable update is a must later on but for now i am just talking about the first 30 k viewers. Good luck, i would love to see this book succeed.