My wife is about to go to work, and I had to prepare something to eat. I'm publishing right now.

Wow... what to say? I'm happy that you think like this, because I struggle a lot with the pacing and was trying to find a balance (I'm one of those guys who like slow paced stories). If you liked the story, spread it to your friends :D

Gabriel's body was still in the secret club, they couldn't literally bring his body outside of there, because it would be like using a flashlight in the dark. so either Erik morphed, he would still be found out. The attack on the villa took place soon after they got out of the club, that's because they had to take advantage of the small window of time they had available before they found the body.

Thank you bro! :D

I understand your point, but the point is that the beginning village is not that, but it's actually the end village, and he must survive there knowing his powers are not adequate.

Pyromancers belong to the elementalist group. Elementalist and mage are separate here.

He is slowly getting there.

Death Mage, Soul Reaver and Grave Whisperer.

Yes.

There are different types of necromancers.

The tag should say what is the main genre. It's absence doesn't mean there won'tbe be any at all.

Level, not energy

He was, but Erik didn't know that. Even if he learned about the fact Becker was under investigation, it doesn't mean he is automatically demoted. Unless proved guilty they can't do anything about him, at least it is how it works in Italy and I applied the same reasoning.

You can if you simply change the alphabet. In high school, I wrote in English, while using the Greek alphabet. Consider I'm Italian. That was basically another language for me. Here is the same thing. Besides, man, this is a book. You should let your imagination fly, not get stuck on these things.

After his regression, Sebastian ended up in between complete madness and complete control. Trivial things can push him down to the abyss of madness that doesn't mean he won't ever be in control. A main character, which always acts irrationally, would be a boring one, and the book would end in two chapters.

I explained it in chapter 2.

I can, but it will take some time.

Thank you :D

o.o THANK YOU T___T

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