Suryaboddu
The MC is a thoroughly unlikable man-child with a chip on his shoulder and a huge amount of plot armor to keep him safe. He walks through the world; it seems his main purpose is to make enemies. 22 chapters was as much as I could stomach. I sincerely recommend the author think more about power and balance, I can see a major nerf is going to have to happen to deal with him long term. That's the sad problem with making overpowered protagonists nearly every single time. Also, all the things that your MC is supposed to 'know' and have done... He may be a huge genius and super soldier, but you had him die at age 25, human time and energy are FINITE. You can't get all of those things done reasonably in 25 years and STILL leave time for the girlfriend and the vengeance he was apparently seeking for her (It's chapter one, so not a spoiler). Next time, try having him be a few more decades old in his first life, it would be more rational to have been able to learn and do all those things in his 40s/50s/60s.
Author I do not know if you have good knowledge of Hinduism but you are twisting the personalities of Divine beings mentioned in Hinduism. Indra is the most noblest person in the entire universe because he is the one who has the most Good Karmic Virtue. Indra mainly plays to roles, one is maintaining Earth and giving blessings with the support of other Devatas to have sufficient food and stop extinction of species, and second most important role is obstructing and testing those who seek Supreme Power from Divine. He tests righteous personalities whether they are eligible to receive the power and he obstructs evil personalities from gaining power. He does all this to protect the living beings.
An interesting beginning however it went down hill fast and never recovered, the MC is very one dimensional and lacks depth. A MC that should be highly intelligent and cunning is nothing more than little brat that is unnecessarily brutal to everyone that wrongs him in any little way. The story is a big disappointment and is best skipped
So far I have read to ch 1254 and plan on continuing till the end. This novel comes from an intelligent and imaginative mind. Yes the grammar has issues here and there but it’s nothing a professional editor cannot handle. Sam is one of my most favorite characters across the many novels I have read. The way his mind works is fascinating to me and I can appreciate his brand of gratuitous violence in the beginning lol. From that I’ve also appreciated his gradual changes over the series and the little mysteries throughout the story. Speaking of story, the world is quite complex though plot armor is a little too strong in my opinion. There is also the issue of situations feeling repetitive. These last few chapters have done well to address that. All in all I can’t wait to see where this long journey will lead to while enjoying the ride along the way!
Im so disappointed on buying the chapter so much at the beginning the story is interesting good but it went all down when the mc become so orrogant a lot of armor plot i dont know what to say anymore i wish to take back all my stone Hahahaha (world background) is good though i love the sustem the beast so cute Oh i hate the romance of this story mf is so meeehhh even the romance so force xd
This is literally the best novel I have read and it's my fav. Everything from world building to characters and plot 10/10. The grammar is a little off sometimes but it doesn't even bother me at all. I really hope you make more novels as good as this one cause I'm literally obsessed. I just really hope you do not add romance and or harem because Sam really doesn't need it and it would just ruin the overall tone of the novel. I wish the whole competion with the Gods can go somewhere too. Overall best novel I know except for the grammar, everything else is perfect. Thank you for such an awesome novel and keep up the good work.
This is an interesting story. It suffers a lot due to bad grammar, lack of editing and some sentences that does not make sense. I would strongly suggest getting a competent editor to improve on the writing. I've read until chapter 40 and will not be continuing due to the lack of writing quality. It distracts me too much from the story. It is otherwise a pretty stereotypical genius MC and story so far, though with more than 1500 chapters at this point it would be difficult to make a good evaluation of the story and characters based on the first 40 chapters. If you are comfortable reading sentences that sometimes make no sense and ignoring bad grammar you might enjoy the story, if not I would suggest looking for something else to read until these issues have been fixed.
its weird that you're trying to introduce technology where they are extremely redundant in a martial cultivation world/arcane world hybrid. MC can tame animals the size of houses and move so fast with the light element, he creates after images.. and you want to make motorcycles, hoverboards, caravan wagons and extremely odd weapons even you fine hard to describe. i understand you're an engineering student, but you wrote for the wrong genre. MC plays like a Katy Perry - Hot n Cold song. bipolar. in a world but not joining it.
It’s an amazing little piece of work, an interesting story and the chill-inducing oddysey of a psychopathic, mentally scarred, mass-murdering genocidal main character. As a power fantasy, it is amazing, but even outside the genre, it can still hold it’s own, with extremely complete and extravagant world building and mind-boggling plot.
The story was one of my first few on this app. tho the Mc is a little op it's somewhat justified. the story is good as well. tho I feel the mc could use some romance and more personal emotional building as I'm currently in the 950+ chapters. there isn't much as of now. I feel it could use a POV change to show what others are going through but it's not absolutely needed. overall I give it a 8.5/10. recommend reading to chap 15-20 to get a feel.