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The MC is a thoroughly unlikable man-child with a chip on his shoulder and a huge amount of plot armor to keep him safe. He walks through the world; it seems his main purpose is to make enemies. 22 chapters was as much as I could stomach. I sincerely recommend the author think more about power and balance, I can see a major nerf is going to have to happen to deal with him long term. That's the sad problem with making overpowered protagonists nearly every single time. Also, all the things that your MC is supposed to 'know' and have done... He may be a huge genius and super soldier, but you had him die at age 25, human time and energy are FINITE. You can't get all of those things done reasonably in 25 years and STILL leave time for the girlfriend and the vengeance he was apparently seeking for her (It's chapter one, so not a spoiler). Next time, try having him be a few more decades old in his first life, it would be more rational to have been able to learn and do all those things in his 40s/50s/60s.

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I know a novel that’s like that. It took mc decades and once he achieved his revenge he died of old age on his deceased wife grave and was reincarnated. That’s all in chapter 1 btw so it’s not a spoiler🙂