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An interesting beginning however it went down hill fast and never recovered, the MC is very one dimensional and lacks depth. A MC that should be highly intelligent and cunning is nothing more than little brat that is unnecessarily brutal to everyone that wrongs him in any little way. The story is a big disappointment and is best skipped
Having read the whole story, my only true complaint is the few paragraphs at the end in which the story's end is summarized, its almost like the author ran out of ideas and chose to wrap up the story. Which was truly disappointing when there were so many things that were left unsolved/finished. Honestly the story could be double the current length and still have more to cover the world building is amazing, while the character development is a bit lacking and it would have been nice to see a bit more diversity in the characters.
The Story is a complete disappointment, the author seems to forget what the story is about at certain points and just starts a completely different story with the same main character. It starts as a Rune Magic story, then turns into a Beast Tamer story and after that changes once again and every time it is like the MC completely forgets everything they knew about the world and his friends. It is best to just skip this story and save your money
While an interesting story for the most part, a main character that takes enjoyment out of an abused orphan being bullied by a murderer, especially when said murderer is partially responsible for the murder of said orphan's parents, is completely off putting. I am not saying that the MC should outshine the Chosen One, but it would certainly be beneficial for him to make powerful connections, and sadly the path he is currently on shows him as nothing more than a revenge driven loner that will ultimately accomplish nothing.